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by BeaBibliophile

schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Would you stop talking about Claudius! That was excellent! I really enjoyed this story! Good work! -Shayne
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM

I especially like Lucius stories, no matter who he's paired with. This particular female was pretty and stacked, but would only ever be an appetizer for his carnal menu. I guess for such a sexually focused man, Narcissa's rigidity in bed isn't nearly enough. Sabina might have some native shrewdness that Lucius has identified to the point where he needed that oath and I think he was smart to do so after he heard her ingenuous litany of previous 'lovers'. She's very physically inclined herself so I'll bet Lucius will get lucky again after she weds. He'll have to make sure she has no real expectations of him, however. This Lucius is pretty canon, and cold, if charming. Lovely writing - you made the plot succinct as a good one-shot should be, moving the characters along, but giving explanations for their movements and clandestine agreement for sex. Very nicely done!
person embieria
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!