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YAY! Chaptery awesomeness!! YAY!!! I so very, very glad to see this had been updated, and I'm totally looking forward to the next chapter!!

Draco should top first, since Harry probably has no idea what to do!!!

I am really liking this story!! As for who tops first... well in my opinion it should be Harry since in this story he seems to be the more, how should I say it, masculine? hahaha... *grins* But then again you are the wonderful author so the muse is yours!!

P.S. As for spelling mistakes in the story there a minor few... it's mostly in the use of 'and' instead of comas and such... if you would like I could fix them for you! XD

NOTE: PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!

Mmm So glad you updated! I've been waiting so long for a new chapter from you. And you didn't disappoint. Well, except for the end. lol Meanie!! But good job! Can't wait for more. :)

Ooh, Harry should top (but then I am a sucker for top-Harry, usually because it comes hand-in-hand with possesive-Harry, that I love even more)
Great chapter, poor Draco being left alone like that. ;_;
Hope you update soon!

Chapters 1-5

I am an ungrateful brat and you are the sun rising in the east. I can't believe I've never checked to see if you write before! I wanted to leave a review that said OMG ILU THANK YOU FOR YOUR REVIEWS and then I realised that you have some really interesting summaries, and settled in to read.

That said, I'm going to write this down as I read, so that I can tell you what I think, as I think it.

Chapter 1:

"If you even dare say Malfoy, Harry, I'll cut off both of your legs right now. And maybe something else."

I DIED. XDDDDD Hermione rocks. In my next fic (in which Harry will either be a girl or a snake; haven't decided yet) she and Ron will be alive, so I get to play around with their interplay, too. Poor Ron. Passing out dead on the floor because she's dating Nott. XDD

"Blaise Zabini and Malfoy are coming too."

"WHAT!?"

THUMP!

"When did he wake up?"

LMFAO!!!!!!

Her careful manipulation of Harry was PWNSOME. "All alone... in Bali... with three Slytherins... no one to hear me..." XDDDD

I somehow readHarry noting Malfoy's 'aristocratic aura' as Malfoy's 'erotic aura' and had to do a double take to make sure of what it actually said. XDD Though that would be funny; Malfoy the Sex God. Oh god. *headdesk* Fanfic idea. *scrawls it down and continues reading*

Chapter 2:

YAY, Harry cooks! (He cooks, he cleans, he even does windows. Malfoy's a lucky boy. XDD)

LMFAO!!! I'm tickled that I thought the exact same thing about this line:
"And what better opportunity than to show him how friendly we can be than tonight?"
Oh, they can be FRIENDLY, alright. XDDD

(about this time I lost track of what chapter I was on. Sorry about that. XDD)

LE GASP. Can I gank this from you? Wizard's Truth or Dare - That has promise. Can't believe I've never seen it before, or thought of it myself.

"Honestly you two, grow up." - Theo's like a boy version of Hermione here. XDD I always liked Theo as 'the bad guy' but he really works as a good guy (the way you portray him, anyway.)

Harry and Draco's little water-fight was so cuuuute!

I just realised that Harry/Ron is kinda squicky. OO; At least it's not permanent in this. Can't wait to see how Ron and Blaise and then Harry and Draco end up together in light of Harry and Ron's little share and care moment.

But it hadn't been his fault. It was Potter's...arse.
Sure Draco, blame the butt.

OOOOH, MYSTERIOUS PEOPLES. O.O Wonder who they are...~

But Malfoys didn't giggle, and Draco was damned if they started now.
This reminds me of a fic I thought about writing, years ago. Sort of a list of "Things Malfoy's Don't." Malfoy's don't giggle, they don't swear, they don't display overt emotion, stuff like that, and then Draco goes and ruins all his Don'ts after a night with Harry.

Couple of things; it's bad form to interject author's notes into the story - it distracts from the flow and jerks the reader out of the scene. Also, anything more than three drops of Veritaserum is deadly poisonous (I am a Harry Potter NERD. I know. I admit it freely. XD) This is in chapter 5, btw.

Draco thinking a pouting Harry is cute is also too cute for words.

Great so far! I'll check back for updates, but for now I'm off to read your other stories. Thank you again SOOOOOO FREAKIN' MUCH for your lovely reviews on my stories - I LOVE seeing reviews from you~ You're amazing.

BWahahahaha! Oh my word this is one of the best Stories I have ever found and that is saying alot since I am normally creatng works of fiction, which currently I have taken a break from but my Roommate Sav and myself are in the middle of creating our own.


Omg Ron is Hilarious Him fainting not once but twice thats hilarious Malfoy the wy you described him I was like HOtness.

I think i am going to be your Number One Fan! xD


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Drarry is my Favourite I love them n_n



So please keep up the good work!


I am in love with this story. Haha.

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This fic was totally hot I didn't like Ron and Blaise Sleeping together but they do make a rather cute couple? if I must say so.


Keep going I am loving this story it is making me want to Roleplay it out. But I am not sure if I will do that or not. -Nods.- -Gives more cookies.- I Want to seee Harry and Draco getting their freak on! -Nods.-

Ooh! I can't wait! Bars mean alcohol, and those boys could use a bit of drunken inspiration... *snickersnorts*

Great story! I'm loving it so far! Hope you update soon!

Awww, please hurry with the update! I'm very excited for it :)

i know i already reviewed it, but i just read this:
"He pulled up the right sleeve of his arm and Harry let out a relieved breath to see the bare, pale arm without a hint of a blemish."
No wonder you saw no Dark Mark, Harry dear.....its on the LEFT arm it's supposed to be.....
oh and i think i'm haivng an intoxication of Harry constantly flushing at every fucking word Draco says. Too much. Is he red in the face 24 hours a day???
but anyway, no matter these little details, i really like this fanfic. I look forward to the next update. even more since you wrote it will be a sex scenne :D geeeeez ^^