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for Partners Sequel to "The Hunt"

by ronsmistress

schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this caused tears :-)
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this, and I thought the idea for a potion that opens the line of communication between a couple was quite creative. Good job.
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a fantastic sequel xxx

I would love for you to have maybe another sequel with maybe a wedding with all 4 pairings xxxx
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, and the prequel! I hope to see more of your work.

slight thing you might want to be aware of.... in the pair Severus and Hermione got to test out the potion the first time, the guys named changed from Alan, to Rupert in the final chapter. I don't know if I missed reading a part of the story where that changed... but just letting you know

- a fan
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Trust me on this...take the time to get well!
I am really enjoying your story, but you need to put yourself first.
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg, love it love it love it
they should us the potion more often to reveal their kinky desires,
also, severus should feel like he is unworthy of hermiones love? i dunno, just ideas
but whichever way you take this i'll still love it
LoVe It!!!!
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far!! I was meaning to ask if this is the sequel to The Hunt and if we will see a glimpse of the other pairings in this fic xx