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for Just a lapsus

by Akashavampyr

person Asherah4u
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the new chapter. Also I think it would be cool to have the next one is Draco's pov. It would let us know what was going through his mind. lol Anyway really love the story. Update soon! :)
person Michelle
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think for the next chapter you should get some of Draco's perspective in there. Let us know what that boy's thinking. :)
Loved this, and your first take at slash is good :)
person Juana13
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting... can't wait to read more. will this 'lapsus' grow into something more??
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. now that is great! please do continue. i'd kinda like to know what draco is thinking and if he's having as much of a "problem" as harry. *snickers*
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Harry! Tooo cute! Can't wait for chapter 3!!!
person Juana13
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, very nice...
love to see how this would continue.
but if you want it just to be a oneshot, that's ok.
wish there was more though...
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it !
that is one of the most erotic and full of tension bout i read, ever !
thanks and hope to see more of your works
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... More please!
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did you mean "lapse" instead of "lapsus?"
Because "lapsus" isn't a word... but I wasn't sure if you were making it one.
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
brillant, i wonder how many lapsus Draco's going to have?