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for Indecent Proposal

by Seacilin

schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting...let's see where it's headed to.
person Aalto
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How about completing Emporial Stripes before starting a new story? Their both very interesting but it soon fades when neither get updated.
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wicked! I think this is going to be sexy awesome. You've got some grammar glitches, especially in those first two paragraphs, but on the whole your writing is very good. Let me know if you want a beta.
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I look forward to more, keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO for LVHP!!! Need more of it
person wynja
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great! Well written and original and complex enough to really be interesting! My new fav-HP story I think! I hope chapter two will come along soon!
person patrysza
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehehe great story ,funny beginning ^^ hope 4 more soon XP
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh looking forward to more of this. Love LOVE LOVE!!!!! Incubus stories. Update soon.
person Ann10550
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I like this story....Please continue ASAP
person Selera
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Umm wow! Can't wait to see what's next.