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for Betrayed

by Akashavampyr

schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eek! I would love to read the rest of this but I feel your pain with writer's block. It sucks doesn't it?
person mjd
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow very powerful chapters, I kind of wish now I had waited to read this as I want to read the next chapter already. I do have to ask that in chapter two you said it was months and years later that Harry was found innocent. How old was Harry at the time of death? I am curious on how old everyone would be at the time of the haunting. I am sure that either Ron or Hermione are next.
person Darkmanu
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
not a bad story wud be nice if chapters were longer or if to stay this length then to put out a few at a time