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by Akashavampyr

schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There should be more it a good story.
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please do write and update the story soon! Can you alert me when you update? my e-mail adress is corsula@hotmail.com thanks ^-^
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can hardly wait what mayhem Harry will cause when he finally gets to Hogwarts! Good story. You write well and there were no annoying spelling errors ^-^
person SilverLion
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Here are some corrections: Headmistress McGonagall, Mrs. Figg, capitalize the House names (Slytherin, Gryffindor, etc.). This is an amusing story. I would've gotten a kick out of it if he had flirted with Draco in Madame Malkin's (just to see how he would react). Is he gonna get with anyone later?
person Selene89
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome (so far) Can't wait for the rest.
person ech1964
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LUV IT !! (giggles). and I quote, "To make you understand how muggleborns see your little speech, of course." Just priceless.
person NarutosBrat
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems your brilliance know no bounds. I haven't seen such a cynical human being since I stopped reading Harry Potter when the sixth book failed to live up to the ainticipation the Order left us with.
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think harry should have mentioned their very very poor teaching staff i mean a fraud doing futune telling a dead teacher and having to scrape the bottom of the barrel for anyone even willing to teach defence plus the very low munber of students who pass potions.
person NessaC
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved this!! =)
person Extraho
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love little Harry. Sevvie seems to like him too!! Can we have a sequel? *please prettily*