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for Sea Change

by Jilliane

person cravedom
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do you think he is going to set his robes on fire? I went back to read the first chapter to make sure I did not forget anything and indeed I had. I had forgotten about the whole Potter and Draco being realated. I am eager to find out the details specially when the story is Lucius/Severus. There are some juicy secrets in this story. I wonder what Harry and Draco will have to say about it. The thought is almost funny.

Like always your stories make my day.
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you've broken through your block now.

REVIEWS always help.

I know your Severus is going to light into Dumbles something fierce, I hope he gives him what for. I bet now he regrets having killed him before. Maybe he can make Dumbles and Inferi and kill him again. Manipulative Dumbledore is always the best foil for Good Snape.

Thanks for the new chappie. Write more soon.
person SickPuppy
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two - Dun dun duuuunnnn! It sounds as though Severus is all set to give Albus a piece of his mind, something I always enjoy.

Lovely chapter, as always, m'dear! Please keep up the good work, (and huge thanks to Tambra for getting you going again!)

SP
person GillyChan
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please ;D I'm liking this one so far!
person cravedom
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, how could he keep this secret for so long! I bet Severus is glad he killed the old fool. I could even sort of understand him not telling before Harry's sacrifice; why not after? Severus missed his son's childhood and his grandchildren too! Arrrg!

That still does not tell me how Albus and Scorpius are related... You do have an mpreg warning
person Sick Puppy
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One - The hell? How on earth is Severus Harry's father?! Did he and Lily get it on? And... *thinks* how could Al and Scorp be realted unless ...did Snape do Narcissa? Or, ew.. Bellatrix?!

I am eager to find out more! And eager for Luc to come in and save Sev from some scheming woman!

More please!

SP (Nope, still not signed in!)
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun dun dun. is right. How can you leave us hanging like that? Your faithful readers need to know the rest of the story. Shoot.

Albus Dumbledore is quickly becoming my least favorite character. You've written his character well.

Write me and post soon.
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Already loving the set up. I can't wait to read more. I hope you get the story up soon. HINT. I wonder why James is so prejudiced about Slytherins. Even in cannon, he was just a little jerk to Albus when his little brother worried about being put in Slytherin. Perhaps Harry can set James straight about Slytherins since he's going to be teaching DADA. I hope.

Great first chappie. Can't wait for more.
person Sick Puppy
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hang on... Did I read that right? Al is in SLYTHERIN and Scorp is in GRYFFINDOR? It certainly looked that way!

And, I'm really interested in what's going to happen. Like it says, Al and Scorp seem close. Is Harry really going to be that happy about his son being so "friendly" with a Malfoy?

And, what is Albus (Dumbledore) up to?

Good stuff, mucho intriguing!

SP (Sorry, I'm not signed in).

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