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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. I'm thoroughly enjoying every minute.
Nemesis ^_~
Nemesis ^_~
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely story - there are not enough snape/lucius stories out there, and snape = harry's father! so nice. (ok, so i guess they WON'T be up for a threesome in this story).
it's a pity that this story didn't continue as it seemed you had fun writing it: the narrative and the dialogues felt so energetic and real.
it's a pity that this story didn't continue as it seemed you had fun writing it: the narrative and the dialogues felt so energetic and real.
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A thousands apologies dear! I moved back to the US (was in South America) and since we were all sharing my laptop it was hard to get the time to read my stories.
Usually when I get a late update (not harassing you, promise) it is necessary for me to read the story again or at least the last chapter. However since time is so tight I decided to just read it, not hoping to understand because frankly I could not even remember what the story was about. To my surprise after the second paragraph everything came back to me! I would like to think that the Ginkgo Biloba is working but it is probable the fact that you wrote the scene seamlessly. It was like I had just read the previous chapters a couple of weeks before. Well not really a couple of weeks ago I was drowning in boxes
Usually when I get a late update (not harassing you, promise) it is necessary for me to read the story again or at least the last chapter. However since time is so tight I decided to just read it, not hoping to understand because frankly I could not even remember what the story was about. To my surprise after the second paragraph everything came back to me! I would like to think that the Ginkgo Biloba is working but it is probable the fact that you wrote the scene seamlessly. It was like I had just read the previous chapters a couple of weeks before. Well not really a couple of weeks ago I was drowning in boxes
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I was going through old emails and found a notification of the prologue and chapter one from months ago, sorry!
But I was excited to see there are three chapters. ^_^ (I recognize part from LJ)
Anyway, I just love the way you write Snape in this. He's the perfect blend of bitter and sarcastic, lol. So entertaining. ^_^
It will be interesting to see how his relationship with Lucius will develop. :D
But I was excited to see there are three chapters. ^_^ (I recognize part from LJ)
Anyway, I just love the way you write Snape in this. He's the perfect blend of bitter and sarcastic, lol. So entertaining. ^_^
It will be interesting to see how his relationship with Lucius will develop. :D
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I applaud you.
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three - Oh I do enjoy reading your Snape, he is so full of perfect sarcasm! I quote:
I gave over 15 years of my life to trying, futilely I might add, to instill knowledge into the tiny minds and empty heads of future generations of wizarding spawn, only to be frustrated at every turn by their complete inability to comprehend even the most basic of instructions! I have been doused in more vile concoctions, stained and scourged by the most foul of brews, and nearly blown up more times than I care to remember, and I will not subject myself to that brand of hell again!
Oh god, so perfect!
And the last bit, with the note from Severus? 'I hate you', lovely! Expresses perfectly Snape's annoyance at giving in (yet again) to Albus' manipulations.
Wonderful!
Of course, now I want to know why Harry is quitting as an Auror, and when poor Severus is going to confess all!
SP
I gave over 15 years of my life to trying, futilely I might add, to instill knowledge into the tiny minds and empty heads of future generations of wizarding spawn, only to be frustrated at every turn by their complete inability to comprehend even the most basic of instructions! I have been doused in more vile concoctions, stained and scourged by the most foul of brews, and nearly blown up more times than I care to remember, and I will not subject myself to that brand of hell again!
Oh god, so perfect!
And the last bit, with the note from Severus? 'I hate you', lovely! Expresses perfectly Snape's annoyance at giving in (yet again) to Albus' manipulations.
Wonderful!
Of course, now I want to know why Harry is quitting as an Auror, and when poor Severus is going to confess all!
SP
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"And just exactly how do you propose I do that, Albus?" Severus sneered. "Perhaps I should invite him to tea and Sunday dinner at Spinner's End, where we can reminisce fondly over my abominable treatment of him when he was my student, and whilst we are having a good laugh over that, I'll just nonchalantly drop my little bombshell. Oh yes, I can see it now. "By the way, Harry, not only was I an utter bastard to you, I thought you should know, I'm your father." Do you think he'll welcome me with open arms, Albus? Hmm?" *dies* Severus Snape at his snarky, sarcastic best. I'm itching to know what has happened that Harry wants to give up being an Auror and come to Hogwarts to teach. Gehenna? ~lol~ Hogwarts has it's own special level of hell for Severus. Not just Hell or Hades, had to be Gehenna for him of course. Love the owl message! So Severus! Poor Minerva! Her iron backbone seems to need a bit of scotching up now that she is faced with so many Potters and numerous problems to handle on her own now. I'm sure that James or Harry would either be enough on their own but now she has a duplicate of each on board and Lily's on deck. Shesh. Hope that having Harry back helps now that he is an adult and hopefully grown out of flaunting the rules. LOVE this story. Write faster!
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Severus's note was funny, but I do hope he's able to become part of Harry and the children's lives... where's Lucius?- thanks for sharing!
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please telll me you're going to wriite more cuz no one saw that coming it was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit to a little confusion - the closest relation Scorpius/Albus could possibly be is first cousins, and as the story is set in England (although frowned upon) the relationship is perfectly legal. Anyway you have a very unique premise and it's an interesting beginning, I look forward to seeing where this goes and what you do with it x x x