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found this in the archives and loved it. Very diff plot. Sorry that it there was not more posted.

I like but I do not understand it at first said that Scorpio and Albus are family later means that the real father of Harry is Snape.
understanding of what Lily is pregnant of the best I think later I will pull my doubt.

um... still waiting for the explanation of how exactly snape being harry's father has anything whatsoever to do with scorpius and albus being closely related. Its like.. er.. wait.. what?!
I assume some sense will emerge when lucius turns up.

So far I like this story. I really adore when Severus is revealed as Harry's father (much, much better than James sr.), but I fail to see how a relationship between Al and Scorpius can be forbidden: they should have the same father (or the same mother) but if Sev is Al's grandfather, the worst is for Scorpius to be his uncle (Sev and Draco as Scor's parents) or his first cousin (Sev and Lucius as Draco's real parents), therefore in England is perfectly legal for Scor and Al to be in a relationship (even in the wizarding world for all the pureblood families are related so there are a lot of marriage between first cousin). Or Sev is Scorpius' father too? I really hope not.
Hope to read the answer soon.

i totally love it! and I want to ask if you are going to continue? please let me know!

This is a great story so far and I hope you write another chapter soon.

Still waiting for an update. :) I like this story so far, I'll be patient as I can for more.

Ahhh, what a great chapter chapter four is. I love the character driven scenes we get, and there are some superb ones in here. Harry is a fantastic father, and poor Severus seems less than thrilled at meeting up with Harry - hmm, I wonder why?! It's got a great rhythm to it - odd, I know, but it flows nicely and builds beautifully. And, I know I got a sneak peek at it, but I was thinking about a line from it yesterday and couldn't remember if JKR had written it, or you had - that's how good it is!

SP

I love how you juxtaposed Snape's slightly sad farewell to his empty house and Harry's kid-bustling farewell to his family. It's so sad that Snape, after all these years, still has no one to see him off, to love him. You better fix this and quick, J. I don't like sad Snape.

I can't wait to see what Harry thinks when he realises Snape is on staff and will be interacting with him on a daily basis.

Great job, and I'm glad you're back.

T

Confused but quite curious! Thanks for sharing, PW