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for The Masked Lady

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, you poor thing! How on earth...WHY would you be updating when you're that sick?! Please relax and take care of yourself. As much as I love this story, and I do, it can wait. Feel better soon. Cyber tea and crackers to you. Hugs, HG4eva
person Jade Rider
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O Okay, firstly...Oh. My. God. I LOVE this chapter. I can imagine Hermione doing that stragety and Draco's cockyness is always loved. I like seeing the soft and tough side of Lucius in the same scene. Secondly, I'm sorry to here that you are sick. I've been so sick once that I slept for three days straight. Also, I can imagine Herminoe doing that stragety. And I cannot WAIT to see what Hermione will do. I really wish this didn't only have three, wel now two, chapters left but I guess since it's this far, it's only right to end it. I can't wait to see your next story and the conclusion to this one. I hope you get better.

- Jade Rider
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Utopia getting us all an extra delicious (and moving) chapter. :)
person Jade Rider
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Astoria Greengrass-Malfoy. I have to say, I don't like her. I wnna say the copycat Masked Lady is her but she has platinum hair and hazel eyes, right? But then again, there IS such a thing as polyjuice potion. Maybe she found out about Elizabeth? I don't know but this is driving me up the wall. You said only three more chapters. I'm very sad to hear that. I do hope the are good, long, and awesome chapters then. And I cannot WAIT for the catfight. I hope it's not to cruel for me to say this...but...It would be interesting to see what happens if Hermione took care of the copycat, but got hurt. I think Lucius would...Well, let's face it. He would be probably go insane. But I WOULD like to see his reaction though. Well, I guess all there is to say is well done. I LOVE this story and I check but several times a day to see if the next chapter is up yet. And if you keep writing stories like this, then I will be checking long after the Masked Lady and others end. Seriously. They would have to be brain dead NOT to love this story and Lucius Malfoy and general. I mean, who can't love Lucy and his pine-cane?

- Jade Rider

P.S.
Sorry for any spelling mistakes. It's like...really earlier for me. *yawns* And although I'm not asking you to do this, it would be nice to find a good war pick with the ship being Lucius Malfoy and Hermione Granger. If you know any, could you please tell me? I'm trying to find some good fanfics to read. I have no life. XD But seriously, I would be very grateful. Again, excellent job on this story. - J.R.
person triz
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
copycat? my money is on that astoria bitch that draco has for a wife. i would love to see hermione knock her lights out.

and hermione loves lucius. she doesn't wanna believe it yet. she does! least we know who loved her first =)

personally, can't wait till your new sshg fic.
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, what's happening to you? This is the third time you have been late on a chapter this story. Usually you have them up almost first thing in the morning. And today is update day...
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was so lovely and touching....as dirty as he is, he can be tender too....sigh
person kittycat30
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!
person mageemi
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CH 18: Sorry for not reviewing all along, but I have been following and anxiously awaiting each update. Wonderful story! Wonderful. I really liked seeing a more vulnerable Hermione in this chapter and loved Lucius tender response to her insecurities. I can't wait for more. ;-)
person KellyJCR
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot and incredibly sweet. Love it! Can't wait for more.

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