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Don't take offese if I cuss at you, love. But that was fucking brilliant. Damn and double damn! It had all the elements that excitement should have. Danger, physical altercations, love, lust, amusement, and sexy sexiness. (And an audience.) That was such an amazing chapter. I am stunned by its perfection.

~Mia

Did not see that coming! But that was perfect.

You don't have to get to an Epilogue soon, you could continue this.

I KNEW IT! That's EXACTLY who I thought it was. I just knew it was Astoria. Really great update. I loved how Hermione came in as the real Masked Woman and totally kicked her arse. That was awesome. I can't wait for more!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I'm sad to see this one wrapping up. This is one of the better HG/LM stories out there.

Awww... So sorry I didn't review for such a long time. I had a research report that needed to be done.

So, it's Astoria who was the impostor. That explains her sloppiness... But for that she was successful for quite some time, wasn't she? Lovely, lovely story, I am already looking forward to the epilogue. Well, on the other hand maybe not - it means that it will be over...

Wow great action scene(one of the best I have ever read.). I never would have expected to see a soft side to Draco. The fact that Astoria was his assailant I would have expected a huge blow-up from him. This really showed how much they have all changed for the better. Love the fact that Hermione finally gave in to Lucius. It was amazing what comes to light in extrodinary situations. I can't wait for the epilogue. Well done!!!!

That.......was perfect!!! And I am nearly off the chair laughing at Draco's bold antics regarding the ogling of Hermione in front of Lucius. Not only has Hermione made Lucius happy but she's reunited father and son in a way no-one thought possible. :)

I can just see Lucius now, locking his daughters away, never to see the light of day...more than likely because there are man in the world that would do to them when he did to Hermione; either that, or considering what Hermione was like at Hogwarts, and what he's like...one year at Hogwarts and any children of theirs would raise the damn castle to the ground. *Snigger* keep any children in a barrel until thier 18, feeding them through a little hole in the top, and check on them when they hit 18 to see if their ready to come out (Thats what my dad threated to do with me, i kid you not!)

I am so happy that, now i have my interweb again i have re-discovered your fanfics, i honestly think that they are some of the best stuff written on this site! And i cringe at the thought of going back to my own story, knowing that it is no where near as good as yours. It was actually a little strange, maybe coz im sleepy, and got some powerful painkillers running through me at the moment, but my brain kinda switched off half way through reading, and it actually felt real...sort of like reading someones mind about thier life and their relationship, not a story.

Gotta be honest here, this actually made me forget about the pain in my back...your stories are really great painkillers...as soon as the sun hits the horizon, i will get back on to the interweb and get in touch with the MHS and other health services, to inform them that they should replace pain meds with your stories. Think they'll except?

I am so happy that when i did find this story a couple of hours ago, that chapter 20 was up, i dont think that i could have stood for not knowing who the copycat Masked Lady was, though, i did have a feeling that it was Draco's wife...i mean, there wasnt a huge number of characters to choose from (the only other idea i had was Ron in a dress, not so much because it was plausable, but i like the idea of Ron in a dress!)

I ate this story up, and i am highly annoyed with myself that i didnt find it sooner...there is something nice about being with a story from the beginning; its terrible walking in close to the end, or after it has been written, it feels to much like the past. Whereas being with a story, checking to see if there is a new chapter up day after day, it kind of makes it feel just that little bit more real. I dont know, could just be me.

I have always loved your stories, they are like water...or Cider, i cannot get enough of them. Actually, thinking on it, i dont think that i developed a true appreciation for Lucius Malfoy and all that he could be until i read started reading your stories, you gave him a whole new dimension that really works for him. His quick scathing wit and his sense of humour...damn it, why can i not be Hermione? Jump in to one of your stories and be with Lucius, just for a day.
Its your fault im obbsessed with him now

Hello :)

First off, let me tell you how sorry I am that you are sick. Three weeks ago I was stuck in bed with a chest cold, and pink-eye to boot. I hope that all your readers are being more patient with your delays in updating then my professors were with me lol Also, I hope you get better and that none of your kids get ill. Anyways, I just wanted to let you know how much I adore your stories. You are so unbelievably imaginative and are able to mold Hermione, Severus, Draco, Lucius, ect. to whichever setting you want without losing the beauty of JK Rowling's characters. None of your stories are similar to each other and I love how tasteful all of your love scenes are. Even if the characters are using vulgar language it's still sweet and emotional. Grammar is also a big problem I have with other stories, but When I read your stories, I know that it's coming from someone who is educated and has done research with what they are talking about.

This story is just as lovely as all the others. To me it seems more upbeat and fun, but it is no less serious. I also like how you rotate from emotionally taxing stories to those with more humor so we never stagnate in one frame of mind. The fact that come hell or high water, you are extremely consistent with updates isn't bad either. All in all, I think you are wonderful and I know that as long as you are willing to write, I will be here to read :)

Feel better and even though I know you will update soon, I still can not resist hoping for it!

xoxoamandanicole