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Great ass kicking!! Though I have to say that the score cards were hysterical! I can not wait for the LENGTHY epilogue (as promised) Also eagerly waiting for your next Lucius and Hermione story. There just aren't that many of them out there, and you write them so wonderfully!

There were so many damn funny lines in this chapter and I could totally see the comedic touches especially as the two ladies fought: the scorecards, the passing of cigars, etc. But Draco's comments had to take the cake, my favorite: "ignoring Draco

XD Hell yes! JUST how I imagined it. Excellent and I thought that when Hermione got hit, Lucius would kill the woman for sure! I surprised he listened to Hermione...And I KNEW it was Astoria. She was just to fishy. *eats gillyweed and makes fishy face* I'm sad to hear that the Epilogue is coming, but glad also. I can't WAIT for more stories. I hope to see a relly nice, looooong one. This story and plot is a great piece of work and I couldn't have wrote it any better, even if my life depended on it. I seriosuly can't wait to see more. WOO HOO! *holds up Lucius Malfoy voodoo doll* GO LUCIUS AND HERMIONE SHIPS! And the pine cane as well....*wicked grin*

- Jade Rider

P.S.
You said you were able to update before you went to work? So, I guess that means you are feeling betetr. I'm so happy! I hope you stay all nice and cheery for awhile. Hope you have a good day! - J.R.

Your writing is worth getting up early to check the updates for!

Again: great, great, great!!! :)

Can't wait to see how many girls there'll be for Lucius and Hermione AND what's going to happen with Draco and Elizabeth! ;)

xx,
Jenn

Excellent. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hi there. Glad to know you're feeling better. I really enjoyed this chapter and laughed out loud at them keeping score while she was fighting, as well as Harry's delimna over what to do as an Auror and her very admiring friend. Lovely, my dear, simply lovely! Your Draco cracks me up. Plus, a panicky Lucius was fun to read at the end. LMAO Thanks and I look forward to the epoligue! HG4eva

OH YEAH that was definitely a great fight... i love how the men stood on the sidelines and let hermione handle it that was great and way to go she is tough.... i thought it was funny that draco and harry were holding up score cards that was funny.... ok so it was astoria great job.....ok so in one of your author notes a couple of chaps ago you mentioned something about a severus fic coming up soon i am SOOOOO excited about that i just love your fics.....

Lovely lovely ^-^ Keep up the good work.

H'ray! LMAO at the scorecards thingy, but I can almost see them doing it. See, told you she'd kick her arse.