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for The Masked Lady

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! What a wonderful story! I cannot wait for your next Lucius and Hermione story =) I do truly love your stories, every last one of them. Though I have to say Draco and Hermione stories don't really do it for me. But Lucius and Severus are so hot in their own way. One dark and forbidding, the other light and so sure of himself and the world around him. I am eagerly waiting for your next (of many, I hope) stories. Thank you
person Always Intimate
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't begin to say how much I love your stories. I run to my computer to look at the updates, and hope and pray that you've updated.
this story was so hilarious, I laughed with Draco in the last chapter, their fighting is just so funny!
I feel kind of bad, because my comments aren't really good, but just know, that I love every story you wrote and I really want to keep reading them (so keep posting them :P )
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I would soo love for you to try your hand to another dramione fic :D
person mageemi
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a wonderful ending. Draco calling Harry there to watch them fight was hilarious.
And years later, I loved protective, fatherly Lucius. Raising all those daughters will drive him crazy. I loved Draco telling Lucius: "Vivvie wants to get dressed up and go to a grown up party and she
person KellyJCR
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A cute Lucius thought I'd never see the day! That was a great ending you wrapped everything together perfectly. Looking forward to your next story and tell Lucius to be patient and let Severus have a little attention for a while. As ever well done!!!!
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
totally loved it...sorry to say that is the end.....
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lucius - all those daughers - is that poetic justice or what??? LMAO

Another wonderful masterpiece and a pure pleasure to read from beginning to end - thank you once again for sharing your talent with us. :)
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i laugh in amusment, Lucius is soooo sweet....convent for his girls! lol. Why is it that fathers are so oper-reotective of thier daughters, and not their sons...i mean, one would have thought that given Lucius' and Hermione's history, that they would have made sure that all thier children are able to defend themselves against any big bad that may come there way?

And Lucius, being called a Queen...poor little Peacock.

For a moment, i had a hard time believing that those two would have so many kinds, till i realised that the potency of Lucius would probably over-ride any normal contreceptive potion or spell in the world...probably couldnt put up with the continus onslaught either...

Love this story, and the ending is so sweet, with out making me gag (so stories just end so perfectly that it makes you ill with the lie of it all...perhaps its just me, but happily ever after forever is just bollocks!) it was a perfect ending to a perfect story because neither one is this is perfect...me likie lottie
person Aundree'a
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT!!! Haahaaa!!! Astoria got the crap beat out of her, and it was well deserved!!! Yay!! I loved it!! Can't wait for the epilouge!!
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope you are feeling better darling.

I don't know how I missed chapter 19 so my apologies on not reviewing. Dear goodness, the flexible comment had me laughing so hard I almost choked. And Lucius nearly blurting out his feelings was so lovely and tender. Sigh, Hermione, what a man.

Now, the boys have been held up and perhaps Hermione will come back to hex the day.