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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Snapes_Goddess! I just wanted to say...WOW! Never have I seen such a brillant fic. I have had a very horrible experience at writing. In fact, I was writing a book. I had the last chapter to save and I was done but my comp crashed and deleted not just THAt chapter, but the entire book as well. I am reding fanfictions to gain the courage and will to write again. And your talent...I cannot begin to say what it has accomplished for me. Reading your fanfiction 'Love Thy Enemy', I wrote my first chapter on my FIRST fanfiction. So, please, continue this story and others, and write more! Rest assure I will check in regular. Congrats on possessing so much talent and please, show it more!
- Hermione Evans Potter
- Hermione Evans Potter
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Goodness I love this story! More please?
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH YEAH this is getting good... hmmm so i am totally guessing that hermione is the masked lady... so lucius hair on the back of his neck stood up as he was leaving hermiones office about like it did not the street right before the masked lady was with him.... hmmm... oh and she paid him a visit that was very hot she was definitely on the mark why else would he have diamonds on his short for buttons obviously he wanted her to touch him there maqybe he should place a large sapphire over his groin... ha ha... great job and she made a dare with him hmmm now he will really be looking for her....
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
She sure has his number. I ws thinking earlier that possibly ( and I can be completely off the mark with this) Hermione is so fustrated about her job that she has had some sort of mental split and this "theif" is a way of her to unconciously succeed in her job. My other thought was this "Robin Hood" individual is the catalyst to push Hermione and Lucius together. Which means that she isn't Hermione. You've really got me thinking this out and I am beyond puzzeled at this point. By the way love the fact that she tied him up in his own carriage. I wouldn't have enough self control to walk away from a more than willing and sexy dark wizard. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Awesome update. I love the fact that you have the masked woman (wink, wink) being so forward with Lucius. I'm so glad you updated earlier than you planned. It was a great way to start my day.
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I just read straight through & I'm dying for more! Lucius is so damn hot! I certainly hope he catches her - yum!!!
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far, so very good!! I love it! Im excited for Lucius to find out who the mysterious maksed lady is. Can't wait for another update!
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this. I would say poor Lucius, but I would probably be more accurate to say poor Hermione. I have a feeling the old saying
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just skipped over the reviews you received and I am wondering - am I the only one to think Zorro when reading this? I know that Robin Hood is English and Zorro is not, but still... The mask, the fact that she has a normal life and is not an outcast living in the forrest... It just screams Zorro to me.
In the end it doesn't matter, I guess, because it is an intriguing story independently of that!
He's getting curious, isn't he? Our sexy wizard is in for a surprise! And she's getting him all hot and bothered, just to leave him like that! Go girl, he'll see what it means to be a strong woman who knows what she wants... Yes!
Oho, and if the end is not a challenge, then I have never seen one. It's a great risk, though. Already I thought it dangerous that she doesn't deny that the donations are from the Masked Lady... But this... Leaves me hot and bothered, too, that's for sure!
Thumbs up, I am all in the story!
In the end it doesn't matter, I guess, because it is an intriguing story independently of that!
He's getting curious, isn't he? Our sexy wizard is in for a surprise! And she's getting him all hot and bothered, just to leave him like that! Go girl, he'll see what it means to be a strong woman who knows what she wants... Yes!
Oho, and if the end is not a challenge, then I have never seen one. It's a great risk, though. Already I thought it dangerous that she doesn't deny that the donations are from the Masked Lady... But this... Leaves me hot and bothered, too, that's for sure!
Thumbs up, I am all in the story!
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh she's just brilliant! :D I'm loving the masked lady's interactions with Lucius! This is getting hotter and hotter each time they meet! Now she gave him a challenge he's going to be obsessed with trying to catch her...more lemons for us :) excellent job on the chapter!!