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for The Masked Lady

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lemons, lemons, lemons! Yeah! These two are completely combustible! I can't wait. And, what do you mean she wasn't the mystery?! Huh? Ooh, you need to update again QUICKLY now. lol I look forward to the lemons, of course, but I want to solve the mystery just as much. Great job, so far! Thanks, HG4eva
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG
i have no words!! *squee* i want Lucius to grab me in a dark corner *sighs dreamily*
cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
person smmz79
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow whata great chap... i went away for a couple days and come back and you have updated two chaps and girl talk as well.... wow this is a great fic i just love it!!!!! wonderful job
person smmz79
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ho ho she was cutting it close there at the end... so now you completely confirm that it is hermione... i wish lucius would read more into his bodies responses the hair on the back of his neck standing up then the tingling down his spine of familiarity... he also had a little tought of what hermione would look like in leather... ok great job i love the way that they spare with each other in this chap... this is a fabulous fic great job....
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person KellyJCR
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is in trouble. He has finally meet his match. I'm suprised he did't take more offense to the fact that Hermione called him obsessed in the middle of a board meeting. Maybe Lucius is all for calling a spade a spade these days. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!
person trizfores
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was close! now with the leather outfit... i'm trying to imagine lucius in one, along with the mask. -naughty thoughts- haha! loved it! me want more! more more more! smut and laughs that is.
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: I guess Lucius doesn't need any of the 'special research' from the Ministry's Potion's Department...heh heh!

I was seriously amused that they dry humped like a couple of teenagers not wanting to get naked for fear of getting caught. And Hermione almost did get caught...if the orgasm hadn't fried Lucius' brain, he would have been thinking clearly enough to discover who the Masked Lady was before she disappeared.

So, Hermione is finally outed (to us, at least). I can't wait to see where you take it from here.
MHS
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person kittycat30
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved their little argument! Intellectual girls are just as stimulating as pretty ones... we just have more surprises! Naughty Hermione with leather in her drawer... I'm surprised Lucius didn't notice it - he had attention to detail with her eyes & nails! Must have been all that grinding and whatnot :)