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for The Masked Lady

by soldiersgirl0709

person sayyida
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was such a great story. I love how you made redeemed Lucius. THe part with the copy cat was a bit rushed, but otherwise this was fabulous. I laughed so hard in places I thought I was going to cry, and I read the whole thing in one sitting. A+ and bravis!
person Citten
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay love, love, love, LOVED the story!!!! you know me i could of had it longer but, it was wonderful!!!! espically the ending i love to think of lucius with a daughter cause i can just imagion him being the over proctive type! :)
ps i totally love that lucius has taken over (for a while) in the muse catigory. ;) write more soon!!!
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a brilliant ending...enuf said.
person crystal
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Amazing epilogue! I can't wait to read more of your work!!
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 14: Poor Harry, indeed! He obviously isn
person Sygnus
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"problem is Lucius
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was such a fantastic story. I enjoyed every second of it, thank you so much for sharing it! I can't wait for your next story, I'm always wildly entertained by them!
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brava!! You told it wonderfully and wrapped it up beautifully. I enjoyed every word of that story and thank you for your sacrifices to post it (puking while posting is a new feat!). I laughed out loud a lot during this epilogue and an overprotective Lucius cracked me up!! Thank you, hon. I look forward to the next story! Thanks and take care, HG4eva
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it.
person Jade Rider
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O So cute! Lucius is just so...Man, I KNEW he was a softy! Yet still so aggrogant in his little ways. Good writing. I'm sad to see this end but I must say is was a good ending. This one of my fav stories of yours. I can't wait for more with good old Lucius and his trusty pimp cane. *sighs at the thought* Well, I should leave before I start drooling and hugging the computer to death because of this story or some pic of Lucius. *waves* I hope to see more soon! I will be back in to check!

- Jade Rider