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for The Masked Lady

by soldiersgirl0709

person Anon
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person smmz79
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a great chap and i have to admit i love it went you have them get caught as well i think it is really hot... i think that my fave person to catch hermione is draco i liked the visuals of him catching her and severus in adventure hearts and i LOVE LOVE LOVE it when he catches her and his dad... that is the best although when lucius caught draco and hermione in 'something in the way' that was great as well although i think what was the best part of that was draco messing with narcissa
person Sygnus
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful welcome back!! As always filled my heart with joy and put a smile on my face... Got my laughing again...
person VoraciousReader
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, that has to be one of the funniest scenes I've read in along time! I nearly wet myself laughing!
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"a woman wrapped around him with one hand full of ass and the other full of breast" - ROFL -- that line was HILARIOUS.

Okay I think it was about time Draco caught on or caught them so hurrah! I think it was charming and fun. I really like how much fun and how free Lucius is with Hermione. It's honest.
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was a great chapter xxxx
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The picture in my head of all of that was absolutely hysterical! Draco's shock and sputtering was perfect! I wouldn't wan to get caught either, but reading it is great! Thanks, hon!
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO - oh to have seen Draco's face when he walked in on them. To be fair, I wouldn't have known what to say, do or think either but it cracks me up just the same. And better to have Draco find out first than anyone else (besides the technicality of Harry, of course). I love how neither of them had a problem of being seen together, no shame, no guilt just a total take it or leave it attitude. LOVED IT.


I've had a lovely day today, all my favourites have updated. :)
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story is awesome! The humor is a pip. Introducing the relationship to Draco the way you did was perfect! I can't wait to read more.