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for The Masked Lady

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a big fan of anal, but the way you write it makes it seems rather nice, actually. However, I really, really feel sorry for Snooks.
person Missa
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Anal-play dirty and taboo? XD Perhaps a bit dirty but hardly taboo, and hardly unusual.
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update. Your adjectives and metaphors are perfect, hot and sexy and trasport the reader to every place you want them to go.

And awww, poor Draco, I know what it feels like to be trapped in a loveless relationship. I felt so bad for him. :(
person Mia
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was sexy too. And definately worth the wait. Thank you for feeding the pervy urges.

~Mia
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person triz
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN! it was worth the wait. and talk about baiting from draco. little lu and little herm babies are so cute!
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay I am most intrigued...who is this copycat???? Looking for clues.
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What is it with us these days?! I was just about to get started on a report for work that's due Tuesday when I said to myself, "Well, first I should update my story and then let's just see what else might have updated,huh?" So, that's two of us working on a Sunday. YUCK!!! Where is my rich, sexy, indulgent man who wants to keep me from working, but wants me happy and encourages me to do do what I really want to do...write?! Sigh....

Anyway, that was lovely, dear. I knew Harry wouldn't arrest her, but yes, I felt bad for him getting his feelings hurt. It was funny though to think of him still sitting out in her waiting room listening to them finish. tee hee hee Thanks, hon. Don't work too hard! HG4eva
person vbruce
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You poor dear, no one should have to work on Sunday. Anyway, excellent as always. I'm interested to see how the real mystery develops.
person smmz79
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg whata great chap.... wow the little scene in her office was hot!!!! and OF COURSE harry walked in that was hot to though bc i am not sure i remember harry ever walking in on her in any of your stories although i could be wrong... great job so there is a copycat hmmm could it be ginny??? she seems to be absent so far in this fic although she is mentioned