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for The Masked Lady

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So you couldn't see it, but I gave you a full-fledged smirk at the end of that chapter. Thanks for the update. I like Hermione's confusion, Draco's insight, and the mini-mystery of who this crazy bitch really is. I have an idea, but I'm not telling yet. ;-)

Thanks!
person luna love
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot, not squicky at all! This story is a lot of fun to read. Poor Draco, even if he picked his own bride. I don't think Hermione would let any of their children, if they ever have any, marry for anything but love.
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person smmz79
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeahhh i was beginning to wonder... i am so glad you updated... great chap i think astoria is funny and i can only imagine howvdraco feels about her.... so it seems that although draco is still not to sure about hermione and lucius being together he does enjoy riling them up with baby conversations.... so she let pop her last charry they do seem perfect for each other in the sense that they are both strong willed and adventurous... i had no problem with the rimming, it was well written!!!! great chap
person TashaRose
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it SG. Nothing turned me off at all. {Grins} I like how you vary your intimacy, and you give us a little beyond too. {Grins}
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant chapter, loved the blonde jokes! And it was very hot too.
person KellyJCR
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Didn't think I would like that scene since it was mentioned a few chapters back but, I'll quote Hermione..."It was different, not something I want to read every night but I most certainly would read that type of scene again." Your right it was sexy not to mention naughty and very, very Lucius. Well done!!!!!
person Jenn
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I just wanted to say that I LOVE LOVE LOVE all of your stories - you're an amazing writer, honestly!

I know I never reviewed before but there was this link saying I habe to be logged in to review and I couldn't find my stupid password - now it works without that, god knows why, so I thought I'd let you know that I read them all... :)

Girl Talk is my favourite though ... I love it!

This one's great as well...I can't wait for more! I hope we're going to hear a bit more about Elizabeth?! - Even if Draco and his issues aren't the mainfocus!

I hope that there's a lot more to come from you!!

xx,
Jenn
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I look forward to the next one.
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a dirty, naughty, delicious man....and hey experimentation is a good thing. LOL - Draco can't stand Astoria...that is HILARIOUS. He should just divorce her then! :-) maybe he'll draw inspiration from his father and Hermione will no doubt support him.

the topic of children came up unexpectedly. it certainly put a stopper on Hermione's mouth didn't it? hm, stranger things have happened....