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for The Masked Lady

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHA!! It's Astoria!!!!
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful wonderful ^-^ keep it up
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First I'm sorry you've been ill. I hate being sick. So I hope you continue to get better! Second what a great chapter. Draco and Hermione are too funny. And the ending with Lucius and Draco was too sweet. I can't wait for more, and Astoria is acting even odder than normal. I'm getting suspicious.....
person Griffen
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Marrry me! This plot is incredible and I simply cannot wait for more!!1
person Anon
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The copycat is Astoria Malfoy! Right?
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person KellyJCR
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope your feeling better, being ill sucks to put it lightly. I just had an idea about who the masked lady would be and again I could be totally of the mark but Astoria is looking fairly guilty. It makes sense with the way the relationship is between her and Draco and with the attack he just sustained. I think maybe the dumb bimbo routine is just that a routine and furthermore her reactions to his recovery were not what a wifes response should be. If its not her I'm sure you have a better criminal in mind and you have me completly snowed. Hope your feeling better soon can't wait to see who the copycat is. Well done!!!!
person Bills Bedroom
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter!! But yes, I agree with Lucius,"Girlfriend" does sound a bit trite. How about "Goddess Divine" ?? I know, not going to happen, but a girl can hope. Besides, coming out of Lucius' mouth, anything would be divine!! I can't wait for the ball and see what jewelery Lucius gives Hermione to wear. Hopefully something ridiculously sentimental to him, and she wouldn't have a clue. Sorry, Sorry, writing your story for you, when you can clearly see how much I love your own writing!!
person VoraciousReader
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is gonna kick her sorry, embittered, fluffy-blooded ass. All the way around the block, twice. Nice chapter, very funny, and I am glad you are feeling better.
person Darkephoenix
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the new thief is Astoria. She's actually smart, pissed off about Draco's lady love and wanted to make him suffer. Of course, I could be completely wrong.