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for The Masked Lady

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
See? Now those are the kinds of author's notes I like to read! lol Fantastic update. I thought that was really beautifully done. I can't wait to see who is this new masked lady. I still have my theories, but they're staying in my head for now. =D
person VoraciousReader
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is: AWWWW! Isn't it just a little odd about all of us that we can take a character who is (in canon)a murderous, cold-blooded, socially frigid racist and turn him into a sex god? Not that I'm complaining, mind you. In book or film, Lucius still commands our attention.
person Bills Bedroom
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I need to thank Utopia and yourself for such a lovely chapter!! Well, Thank you!! I hope that I am one of the reviewers that has made you laugh! Great story, though I think I know who the EVIL Masked Lady is. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person crystal
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update. I enjoyed reading the softer side of their relationship. I can't wait for the next update. Ohhh... before I forget. I loved it when he said that when she realized that she loves him to tell him. So wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
person smmz79
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!!! great chap... it was nice to see hermione vulnerable.... can not wait for the next chap i can not believe that there is only 3 chaps left.... but i can not wait to see what you are going to do with snape that should be yummy.... ok so a catfight i had a funny feeling something like that would happen when hermione and lucius were bait that is going to be good.. i am leaning towards astoria but can not wait to see who it is
person nikkuman
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Astoria's the copycat
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter and love the strategizing of our friends. however I suspect I know the imposter is and possilby why so I'm chomping at the bit for an update.
person smmz79
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yuck the flu sucks i am sorry that you are feeling bad i hope you start feeling better.... ok so great chap i think this is one of my faves... the scene you created with draco and hermione was fab... i love their relationship and i like how dracos personality is portrayed in this a lot like he is in something in the way she moves.... or more like the one where she is severus' secretary i can not remember the name.... mastering temptation i think thats it anyway loved it... so astoria hmmm??? i am finding it hard to believe that she is really that dumb but who knows well she is on my list for possibles even more now.... i am glad they told draco he needed to know... is elizabeth gonna make an appearance i thought that she could be the masked lady copycat but i hope not i like to think that she is as in love with draco as he is with her... i had a funny feeling they would have to act as decoys this is going to be interesting.. fabulous job as always
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty sure the copycat is Astoria.

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