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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.
Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.
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May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful beginning! Excellently written. Just the right amount of suspense to turn the page. Looking forward to reading more.
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I have eagerly been reading your story and look forward to reading more.
Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That last line cracked me up. We need to talk? I think they both need more action, much less talk. I also loved the line Snape said about getting on with the copulation. Too funny.
Thanks for the great read.
Thanks for the great read.
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have written so far about this story. Please update soon because I am looking forward to see what you do with this story.
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! The only thing that would make that chapter better would be if you coated it with chocolate. I love their misinterpretation of each other and their self-delusion as well. It's perfectly obvious they are falling in love.
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that there better be an update soon. I love this story, and that's saying a lot since I'm not a Sirius fan at all.
Good job.
Good job.
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh... that chapter was just a teaser :P I'm still anxious to see what will happen!
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as always. I really do love your story. I'll be anxiously awaiting your next chapter.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. i was sucking in immediately! keep up with the good work. This idea feels very original.