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for Back for Good

by LiteraryBeauty

schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I understand about not having many Hermione/Sirius fans on this site. I am always looking for more stories with this couple. I usually leave a good review at the end of the story but seeing as this is a WIP, I guess I need to tell you that I love it so far and am eagerly awaiting your next chapter. As for the sex scene, you captured the moment very well. I read a lot of fanfiction and I see the same words used over and over but you dove into a very well thought out vocabulary. I commend you. Excellent writing style and only the smallest of typos. I will be checking the story daily for updates!
person andarte
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the chapters you've posted so far and I think they are fantastic. Definitely keep it up, regardless of the lack of Sirius/Hermione fans here. :)
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow you write this pairing really well! you're right there is a shortage or sirius/hermione on this site, as well as many others unfortunatly, but you definatly do it justice.
*gives many cookies*
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying ths story. i hope you continue it soon. If you aren't getting as many reviews as you would like on this site you just have to press on and hope for the best. I know how it feels, I'm there now. That is why I wanted to drop you a note saying good job and that I can't wait to read more. For some reason Sirius and Hermoinie is one of my favorite pairings and it is good that someone can wrte them in such a way that their relationship is believable. Again keep up the good work.
person Rachel
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading stories on this site for awhile and this is only my second review. For what it's worth, I am really enjoying this story. It's well-written, sexy without making me feel like a perv for reading it :) and you update before I've forgotten what I've already read. Thank you and I look forward to reading more.
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a Hermione/Sirius fan!

That was a luffly little chappie and I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione wakes up. And I hope there will be another time where they will make love not fuck just because they have to.

Well done!
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear lord! I found this through your Lucius/Draco/Hermione story. Shame on people for not being fans of Sirius/Hermione! I adore the pairing, and I am always looking for a good story about them. But instead of finding a great story, I found an amazing one. I love everything about this story. The dark elements, the sex (of course ^.^) the sweet moments, and affection they have for each other, both Sirius and Hermione's doubts and insecurities...this is bloody fantastic. And I thank you for taking the time to write it and share it with us. I cannot wait to read more of it, and I also can't help but be glad that it is longer than the 10 chapters you anticipated. I hope it will be quite long actually. You have an wonderful style of writing, and I appreciate all the effort, thought, and detail you put into writing it. I hope the next chapter will be out soon..I feel quite addicted to this story, as Hermione and Sirius feel to each other. So please don't let me suffer the anxiety of seperation from it too long? ^.^

XXOO
Ero
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay for another chapter! I've been hooked from the beginning and have followed along the entire time. Do keep up the good work!
person Sonia
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really liked it, i was having a shitty day and then I saw that this story had an update! I was excited and happy agian! good ratings for this one, keep it up!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with you that there are not many Sirius/Hermione fans on this site, but I am here! I like what you have done with the story so far. It is clear that Hermione and Sirius won't have the typical morning after awkwardness, you know the whole ripping feeling and the screams kinda chucked that out the window, but it is going to be interesting to see how Hermione reacts in the morning. Great update and I will be looking out for the next one.