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person brissygirl
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Those dreams are seriously creeping me out!!! But that is the whole point i guess. I'm half expecting the person/thing hissing at Hermione in her dreams to be Voldemort. But you won't do that.

Snape knows Hermione far too well. He knows that no matter what He says to her, she will do what she wants anyway. I seriously can't wait to see what happens when she eventually puts her plan into practice.
person brissygirl
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm seriously addicted to this story and I have only read a few chapters.

Sirius' haunted look, Harry's fury turned to gratitude. Hermione's embarrassment and her connection with Sirius. Those dreams are still giving me the creeps.

There are still some spelling mistakes, if you feel the need to go back through and fix them.
person brissygirl
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am totally addicted to this!!! Obviously something in the spell or potion is causing Sirius to want Hermione and vice versa. I mean who describes their 20 or 21 y.o Godson's best friend sex incarnate!! I totally love that line!

And almost getting sprung kissing by Harry, I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
person brissygirl
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I swear I am gonna melt into a puddle of goo before anything happens!!
person brissygirl
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sirius you have no idea what you have gotten yourself into!! LOL I can't wait to see his reaction when he finally works out that Hermione is indeed a virgin, and he will be her first and probably only lover!!

I can see Harry's reaction, He is going to fly off the handle, shout and scream and not be ok with the thing between Sirius and Hermione. Then Snape is going to say something to either Harry or Sirius and things will calm down and fall into place.

Hermione and Sirius both relieving their frustrations, only to want more.
person brissygirl
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was expecting Harry to scream and yell when they told him the news about the bond.

Hermione should of listened to her body, she will have to learn to take heed of the symptoms and do something about it otherwise both her and Sirius will suffer unthinkable consequences. Sirius finding the book, is going to be interesting as soon as Hermione tells him what it contains. I doubt he will be pleased.

I have been meaning to say for a couple of chapters that I think Snape would have liked something to happen with Hermione. Especially going by the last time she saw him.
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter xxx

Hope someone can knock some sense into Sirius xx
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update. I am glad that Hermione realise that the only one who can fix Sirius problem, is Sirius himself, but by the look of things, she shouldn't hold her breath waiting for him to grow a brain. If he "cheats" by fucking around, please don't let Hermione ever forgive him. The excuse "I thought she had cheated first, so I just wanted to get even" or even worse "a man has needs...." would only be made worse if Hermione actually accepted them.
To be honest, at the moment she should rather push him back into the veil and free the world of another crazy Black.
person LDeakins
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do..Not..STOP..Damnit I want more!!
person KellyJCR
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is evil of you to leave us with a cliffe that good. Nothing tends to bring out passion more than a little angst. I just don't get why Sirius can't trust Hermione with Severus. I think she was right to not tell him about her trip. It seems at times he can't let go of the past. Everyone around him has grown up and he needs to as well I wonder how long it will take him to figure it out. And what is the deal with the bond? You have me confused. I want answers and I want them now! Well done!!!