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for Back for Good

by LiteraryBeauty

schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay and congratulations on your first finish. Thanks for sharing the story with us. I'm not a huge Sirius fan, but you made him readable.
person brissygirl
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There were some things he wanted to talk about with Hermione when he returned home. Important things. Things possibly involving little black-haired, brown-eyed people. Or brown-haired, grey-eyed people
person KellyJCR
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad to see this story coming to a close. It is one of my favorites and I have followed this and your Malfoy story from the very start. In the epilogue alot of authors leave us with the wedding or the birth of the first child. I would like to see them with their finished family. To see just how many they had and where their lifes had led them. Thanks so much for a great story. Well done!!!!
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay i love this story. i started reading it on grangerenchanted. i actually started last night and finished this morning. i just happened to check here and saw that you updated. can't wait for the end. keep up the good work.
person Meeow
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say I'm really disappointed by the fact that your story is about to end. Back for good is really entertaining and well-written. Keep writing!
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ending to the adventure. I'm glad that Frankenhodge will get the help he needs. He's obviously pretty darn sick.

Hmmm... Draco is gay, will we see more of the pairing you suggested? I hope so. And poor Snape. He's left out in the cold again. He obviously had a tendresse for our Hermione.

I impatiently await the next chapter.
person brissygirl
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
K, You've packed a lot of punch with this chapter. I can't remember if I've reviewed it before but I'm doing it again.

Sirius needs to stop acting like a spoiled brat and make things right with Hermione.
I'm curious about the dream at the end, I'm wondering if somehow Hermione and Sirius are linked to the Alensky's somehow.
person brissygirl
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's about time Sirius got a clue! Talk about being bloody stubborn. He'd better do some fantastic grovelling to make things right again.

I'm glad Hermione has the opportunity to try and find some answers from the Alensky diaries.
I can't wait to see what she eventually uncovers.
person brissygirl
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sirius' reunion with Andromeda and Teddy was really sweet, and It seems that some of Andromeda's home truths have struck a chord with Sirius.

The reunion with Hermione was so HOT. I can't wait for the big conversation that is sure to come.
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story.

Sorry for not reviewing. I am one of those terrible ones that read and forget to review and if I do leave a review, I usually only leave one at the end of a story.

I'll try to do better.

Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.