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for What Is This Feeling?

by stranger88

person Bumblebee
schedule January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ive been reading this story for a long time. I cant believe its over! I cant wait to see what happens next. Wonderful job with y
this story
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Updates soon??? It's been a while!!!
I am rereading the story and its even better the 2nd time
person KaNoMiko
schedule March 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've just only begun reading the first chapter, but I've found quite a bit of Grammar mistakes. I've never made a story myself, so I don't know if you can edit your fanfic once it's published/uploaded, but if you can, then I could point out the mistakes I find along the way (if you want me to, ofc).
schedule November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww . This was a great chapter . I love how sweet Mitch was to hermione! Please update soon!
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Updates soon?
Can't wait to see what is going to happen at the next party.. Sounds like it's going to
Be intense
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097

Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

Thank you for your cooperation.
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update soon? I can't wait to find out what happens next. This story is getting intense!!
You are doing great !
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Chapter 15 is intense! This is an awesome story so far! I can't wait to read more !
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Please continue to update!
person Anon
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i cant believe shes mike's sister!