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for Lucid Dreams

by VessaEssel

schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am a sucker for an incredibly dark fic.

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schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing start, you have me hooked and curious for more.

I just ask that you consider putting an extra line between your quotes/paragraphs. Scrunched together is difficult to read on a computer screen.
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
looks fab so far, cant wait to read more. Update again soon.
person jacqui
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! I'm on the edge of my seat, I can't wait to find out what happens. Hope you update soon!
person KellyJCR
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused with whats going on but I get the gist of it. This has the possibilty to be a great story. Hope you update soon. Well done!!