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I'm loving it darling. I just finished chapter eight and I'm breathless for the next chapter. I'm just waiting for you to post chapter six so I can leave my thoughts. Keep up the good work.

Uh, well, yeah. That chapter was exposition hell. Sorry, but the tour would have gone down a lot better if we could have at least spent a little more time with the boys. Maybe try to break it up a bit better next time you have cause to write a set-up like that. And I don't really want to think about Arthur Weasley receiving an enema.

Bella is certainly the cruel one. She's going to insist that the boys in her harem have to lounge about naked bored shitless while they wait for her summons, but they are not allowed to touch each other under penalty of death? Wow. Way to thin the ranks. Even if they may be staunch heterosexuals, a little mutual masturbation never hurt anybody. I guess they'll just have to watch each other for their amusement. It will be interesting to see how you portray their reactions to being used as sex slaves once you actually get to those scenes.

Your story is starting to remind me of a lot of the "Sleeping Beauty" series and the genre of erotica it was based on. However, I really like your idea of subverting the traditional idea of a sheik's harem and making them all men to please the Queen. Judging by the strict rules and enema bags, I take it Bella is not going to just lie back and let them have at it.

Still interested, but give us something a little more next time, maybe. I don't mind you setting up your plot, just don't bore me while you're at it.

Good chapter.

Mamacita, you are a master. Talk about foreplay. I can hardly wait for the main event to begin---namely Bella summoning her new concubines. The thought of this Bella sexually and mentally torturing Harry is a powerful image.

I loved how you described Arthur's mindset and his faint amusement at Bella's re-imagining. The way she tossed him off to his embarrassment and consternation was deliciously done. I also thought his philosophy was perfectly captured and succinct.

Anyway, I'm like Bella now with the squeeing and spinning. Meanwhile, I wonder what Hermione and Molly are up to? Actually, no I don't, I just want to get back to Harry.

Til Friday!

Oh no, Arthur got "sized up" byBella. She is one dirty witch. I had to give a head nod to her feminist rant, I couldn't help myself, even though she's a crazy as a shit house rat. Not to give too much away but I had good chuckle at Lucius's instructions to practice on themselves. I wonder if you will being writing the enuchs thoughts as they "prepare" the slaves. I can't wait for more.

Haha awsome third chaper well written and I'm definatly looking forward to what your gonna do with Harry. That and the reaction from HArry and Ron at being sex slaves. Though I probably wouldn't mind that fate if she was nice to me. See you next chapter.

I love it! Ron's continuing preoccupation with food was very funny and so much like the Weasley. Ditto his questions regarding their 'service'. Oh, but this was too brief and I'm already craving for more! Wonder what kind of group Harry will be moved to? You're setting up a nice little scenario, here. Great work. I posted my latest chapter at almost the same time you did. I'll take that as a good sign.

Checking disclaimers and I am bored out of my mind. Haven't had a chance to read the chapters you sent me but I will and I promise to come back and review.

GGRRRRR! I had such a nice review written out and then it wouldn't post. Here we go again. So it's to be torture by pleasure, eh? I see some wickedly good sex scenes on the horizon. Is Snape going to be alive is this fic?

Great work my dear. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Cooool!! I am absolutely mad for any Harry/Bella kinkiness, so I'm totally excited about this story! The idea of Bella determining his "fitness" to serve her is making me drool. Great opener, although I have to wonder why the crowd didn't retaliate against Bella and her crew the moment they were released. Are the women just going to stand there and let the boys be carted off? Well, I'm willing to suspend disbelief if it means we get to the Castle shenanigans sooner.

/in haughty Bella tone/Let the games commence!!