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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, you weren't kidding about the dancing part. Ron's conversation with Draco was amusing, but no Ferret sex for the Weasel? Surely they will be summoned together again.....surely *eyebrows arching**hint*hint*
Unless Theo were to get his way, which I feel assured won't be happening, as Lucius seems to have a good grip on the situation, being his Big Daddy PimpCane self with the silly boy. At this point, I can't see Bella registering much of Theo's devotion, she sure seems to have left the building in terms of her brain, although I'm sure Queen Bella will return from time to time to get Lucius to bring her some money.
Draco really seems to have his heart set on Marshall, so that's kind of sweet for them until they get busted again. He'd better be careful, assuming they aren't constantly watched in the Hogwarts castle which has always been characterized as an almost sentient edifice (ooh, I think I will use that).
Now, the Weasley gays---I don't know what to think of that, lol. The whole dang lot of them? Now that's batting a thousand. Molly's womb is a Pride rainbow, go figure. I love how everybody has detected that Ron is gay except Ron himself. And is Harry really gay? For gay boys, they sure seem to like sex with Bella when she's not spanking them or hitting them with a Crucio. For that matter, Ron reacted pretty strongly to the Slytherin girls at their initiation test, too, so perhaps he's a little bi? Or was he just overeager at being exposed to taboo bits? Well, it's your story, I'll let you figure it out.
You made Harry such a strong character, when he's not in a chapter, his absence is notably felt. Wonder what's been going through his mind on his night off? And when is Bella going to call Neville? Now that's going to be an interesting night seeing as the only person who hates Bella in canon more than Harry would be Mr. Longbottom. Maybe they can tag team Bella and get her more crazy, although I'm still holding out for Harry in the middle. Heh.
Till next week!
Unless Theo were to get his way, which I feel assured won't be happening, as Lucius seems to have a good grip on the situation, being his Big Daddy PimpCane self with the silly boy. At this point, I can't see Bella registering much of Theo's devotion, she sure seems to have left the building in terms of her brain, although I'm sure Queen Bella will return from time to time to get Lucius to bring her some money.
Draco really seems to have his heart set on Marshall, so that's kind of sweet for them until they get busted again. He'd better be careful, assuming they aren't constantly watched in the Hogwarts castle which has always been characterized as an almost sentient edifice (ooh, I think I will use that).
Now, the Weasley gays---I don't know what to think of that, lol. The whole dang lot of them? Now that's batting a thousand. Molly's womb is a Pride rainbow, go figure. I love how everybody has detected that Ron is gay except Ron himself. And is Harry really gay? For gay boys, they sure seem to like sex with Bella when she's not spanking them or hitting them with a Crucio. For that matter, Ron reacted pretty strongly to the Slytherin girls at their initiation test, too, so perhaps he's a little bi? Or was he just overeager at being exposed to taboo bits? Well, it's your story, I'll let you figure it out.
You made Harry such a strong character, when he's not in a chapter, his absence is notably felt. Wonder what's been going through his mind on his night off? And when is Bella going to call Neville? Now that's going to be an interesting night seeing as the only person who hates Bella in canon more than Harry would be Mr. Longbottom. Maybe they can tag team Bella and get her more crazy, although I'm still holding out for Harry in the middle. Heh.
Till next week!
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always. Oh no Draco and Marshal have been found out obviously Lucious will try to hide it from Bella. Until next time.
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Bella is craaaaazy for cuckoo puffs.
First off, though, I believe it's Fenrir Greyback with an 'r' at the end. Peeping Theo is pretty creepy, but the Death Eaters are a funny bunch to watch, but the sound of it. Cross-dressing is just the tip, I'm sure.
Interesting conversation between Bella and her majordomo, Lucius, who seems to be having a harder and harder time masking his incredulity around the Queen's demands. I'm surprised he hasn't lost complete composure already with her outrageous ideas.
I absolutely love Lucius having the hots for Harry like that and crushing on him on the sly. Bwahaa at Harry's little impromptu dancing--loved that bit and Lucius watching him with a smirk. Harry is so adorable when he's oblivious. And very interesting development how the costumes have been taken over by flattering green colors for Bella's favorite toy.
The session with her was pretty intense, and I felt as conflicted as Harry towards her capricious moods--vacillating between lucid and completely gone moment to moment, Harry hearing how vicious Voldemort could be and how horrific Bella's punishments were. And yowza, they really were harsh; no wonder she's a nutjob. Her narration to Harry was interesting to note, as well, for the way she expressed the savagery with such regret one moment, but seemingly manipulating Harry's sympathy another. It's so hard to tell with her. And poor Harry getting his feelings hurt by her quick change. That boy must be so confused right now.
Lucius sliding his hand nonchalantly down to rest on Harry's ass was delicious. Mmmm, get Narcissa involved and that could be a feisty three-way.
First off, though, I believe it's Fenrir Greyback with an 'r' at the end. Peeping Theo is pretty creepy, but the Death Eaters are a funny bunch to watch, but the sound of it. Cross-dressing is just the tip, I'm sure.
Interesting conversation between Bella and her majordomo, Lucius, who seems to be having a harder and harder time masking his incredulity around the Queen's demands. I'm surprised he hasn't lost complete composure already with her outrageous ideas.
I absolutely love Lucius having the hots for Harry like that and crushing on him on the sly. Bwahaa at Harry's little impromptu dancing--loved that bit and Lucius watching him with a smirk. Harry is so adorable when he's oblivious. And very interesting development how the costumes have been taken over by flattering green colors for Bella's favorite toy.
The session with her was pretty intense, and I felt as conflicted as Harry towards her capricious moods--vacillating between lucid and completely gone moment to moment, Harry hearing how vicious Voldemort could be and how horrific Bella's punishments were. And yowza, they really were harsh; no wonder she's a nutjob. Her narration to Harry was interesting to note, as well, for the way she expressed the savagery with such regret one moment, but seemingly manipulating Harry's sympathy another. It's so hard to tell with her. And poor Harry getting his feelings hurt by her quick change. That boy must be so confused right now.
Lucius sliding his hand nonchalantly down to rest on Harry's ass was delicious. Mmmm, get Narcissa involved and that could be a feisty three-way.
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alrighty! TIme for a review! Here I am at chapter 11, been speeding through your lovely, delicious fic here, and now I am ready to give a review as this fic deserves!
I wanted to say thank you for the review you gave me on my Ron/Ginny fic. I really love this fic of yours! The idea of Bella and a harem is just genius, I love all these luscious boys, hehe. Fred's boldness and Harry's eagerness, really crack me up. I love knowing what Lucius is all about, heh, and I can't wiat for some Harry/Draco! I love those two! eee! I'm quite excited about it.
Yummy, yummy fic so far. Just lovely. I think you've really got everyone in-character, especially Bella and Harry. Arthur, too!
I will review again...:D
I wanted to say thank you for the review you gave me on my Ron/Ginny fic. I really love this fic of yours! The idea of Bella and a harem is just genius, I love all these luscious boys, hehe. Fred's boldness and Harry's eagerness, really crack me up. I love knowing what Lucius is all about, heh, and I can't wiat for some Harry/Draco! I love those two! eee! I'm quite excited about it.
Yummy, yummy fic so far. Just lovely. I think you've really got everyone in-character, especially Bella and Harry. Arthur, too!
I will review again...:D
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love Fred! That was f*****g hot! whoooaaah! The Weasleycest was good in this chapter. Yummers. :D
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always. I really liked getting a bit of Bella's past. It's really too bad that she is losing her mind if only Harry could bring her back. Actually I thought that after hearing that Harry would do something to the other death eathers. Will Harry tell the Order what Happened to her? Or will he kep it to himself?
Until next time.
Pete
Until next time.
Pete
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Chapter sixteen was sooo good! ooh! I loved it! I wish things were more drawn out though. Everything goes rather quickly. I would like...to dwell on it.
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter as always. Im out in Colorado for 3 weeks. The scenary is great. Don't know if you've been out here before or not? Until next time.
Pete
Pete
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what is happening to Draco? He is all....thoughtful, and shit. LOL. Anyway, I LOVED the twinspeak! So, Fred and Ferret are the new Fred and George? **insert Mr. Burns voice** Excellent! I actually really enjoyed their conversation and think that those two heads working together might come up with some good ideas.
Marshall, oh Marshall. Damn it, man, you are so in over your head. Don't know how I feel about the man lusting after Draco at fourteen, but yeah, obviously his friendship with the boy means a lot to him and I can see how they've gained such deep affection for each other over the years. Definitely puts their relationship in a new context. But does that mean that Draco might start feeling something more intense for the older man? I can't believe I'm saying this, but will his interest in Harry complicate things? Or has he decided that Harry is off the market? Seems like something happened there between the time Draco was sucking off his new best buddy to the time that he approached Arthur about Marshall's duties. Or is it like you said before, that Draco is just an opportunist who will take what he can from the Golden Boy but also wants to look out for his former fencing partner (oh man, no innuendo there)?
No Harry in this chappie! :( Oh well, I guess he and Bella are coming up next, so I can be patient....sorta. I'm eager to find out what kind of shenanigans will come into play once Draco and Fred really start working their noggins. And I am curious if Harry will eventually go along with this getting Bella trussed up without a wand scenario. Got me on tenterhooks wondering what will happen to him! Good flow going, can hardly wait for more.
Marshall, oh Marshall. Damn it, man, you are so in over your head. Don't know how I feel about the man lusting after Draco at fourteen, but yeah, obviously his friendship with the boy means a lot to him and I can see how they've gained such deep affection for each other over the years. Definitely puts their relationship in a new context. But does that mean that Draco might start feeling something more intense for the older man? I can't believe I'm saying this, but will his interest in Harry complicate things? Or has he decided that Harry is off the market? Seems like something happened there between the time Draco was sucking off his new best buddy to the time that he approached Arthur about Marshall's duties. Or is it like you said before, that Draco is just an opportunist who will take what he can from the Golden Boy but also wants to look out for his former fencing partner (oh man, no innuendo there)?
No Harry in this chappie! :( Oh well, I guess he and Bella are coming up next, so I can be patient....sorta. I'm eager to find out what kind of shenanigans will come into play once Draco and Fred really start working their noggins. And I am curious if Harry will eventually go along with this getting Bella trussed up without a wand scenario. Got me on tenterhooks wondering what will happen to him! Good flow going, can hardly wait for more.
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as usual. I think Bella has a favorite 'slave'. I also noticed that you included Andromeda. LIke you said before she does seem kind of bitchey wanting to kill of those death eaters and Bella herself. Can't wait to see what she does next with Harry.
Until next time.
Pete
Until next time.
Pete