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for Mad Snorkacks and Englishmen

by SalonKitty

person whatweareafraidof
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story.... ron is going to find out at some point and he cant do anythink about it....

i hope he get hermione and some kinky sex.... can ron have sex with luna a little payback
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17

Yes this chapter surprised me a bit. It was very intense.
I suppose I
person ametomoe
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey! i haven't been following this story for too long, but i'm in love with your characters and the way you tie luna into the 7th book. i've always thought harry and luna would go well together, and you've captured exactly why - harry needs someone to escape into. i really hope you update soon - i can't wait for more!
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16

You wrote a chapter from Luna
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

I thought you did such a good job with Ron
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I found this the night before by mistake. Though reading through this, I'm now abit of a Harry/Luna fan. Thank you for the awesome story and please see this one through to the end.
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

This chapter had a big surprise! *grin*

I love how you add all the fantastic voyeur smut, with Ron spying on Luna and Harry. I don
person whatweareafraidof
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
first i like this story... i like how you showed the BDSM both the good and the bad...

think you for being nice to ron... for some reason very few people like himmm they remeber the few bad think he did and none of the good... he was 13 and 15 and most of these gave the kid a break... ron not stupid he is good at chess and his grade were b he just did not want to study much..

i want to be harry in this story. he is haveing a lot of fun... i can see him being a sub to ron.. not sure way.. yes i am ron stand up to him and will not take his shit...he does not care about his money or fame and will alway be there for him.. and harry was so scarid to lose that..

i hope ron get with homine... they would make a cool couple.. and i can see ron smacking homie ass as he fucks her brains out... i think homie was to feel safe and love and i belive ron could gave her that... and in the bed room i think that she would sub to ron in the bed room and bossy out side... good work on this story...
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13

Your very good at showing Harry
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12

I found this chapter wildly hot. I can