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Chapter 25
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Chapter 23

You know I love the song Cry Me A River, although I have admit, the version by Joe Cocker is not
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Chapter 22

This little sex scene in the tent is so provocative. You set it up so well, with them playing a little Truth or Dare. I can almost feel the sexual energy just bristling between them. You added a good deal of trepidation though, which gave the whole affair a very realistic and uncomfortable edge. All I could think of is, yes, this kind of thing happens. Of course, at that age you are horribly embarrassed and awkward the next day. In truth though, they probably are all so curious, they really didn

Chapter 20

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Chapter 20

This was an excellent chapter, hon! I had no idea what was going to happen. I loved the dark tension you built up and you follow the book perfectly. I always think you do such a good job with the characterization too.

I could just imagine the expression on Luna

Chapter 19

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Hey. Welcome back lol. Well. About Chapter 32. It wasn't one of your best I have to say. But I loved Harry's reaction to finding out about Luna's disappearance. It fits in with what your Harry would do. And I thought Harry was going to tell Ron about himself and Hermione. That was probably the highlight of the chapter.
And the unbreakable vow? I thought that Hermione wanted to tell Ron? I'm guessing she's changed her mind then. But I still hope Ron finds out. What will he do when he does find out? I can't wait to find that one out.

Anyway, good to have you updating again.
And please update the next bit very soon.
Thanks.

Chapter 18

Squee! I love the way you portray Ron and Hermione. They are both so cute when they are tipsy. The young budding sexual tension between them is actually quite provocative, and I am anxious to see where their relationship goes.

I had to laugh at Ron

Very interesting chapter. I love how you're capturing each of the characters' experience. It's very nostalgic and palatable. I really love the little details you're using from canon to make your story come alive. I think you portrayed Harry spot on in such a situation and I image that Ron would have to wrestle him down to keep him from rescuing someone he loved. LOL@Harry trying to threaten Hermione like that and she turning it around on him with an Unbreakable! I hope that doesn't come back to bite them all in the ass. Can't wait to see where you're going next!

Interesting chapter. I have to say though it seems a bit rushed though. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter.
Pete