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Chapter 31

Oooh now I see how Draco comes into this. I know you struggled with the next chapter. I

Spanky fingers to me for not reviewing for a while but I had to review this latest one....My minds eye picture of Harry, Ron and Hermione off their faces made me laugh out loud! It was HILARIOUS! Can't wait to see how the sory progresses. I hope you bring Dudley up again maybe if you write an epilogue?

Great stuff!

Chapter 30

OMG! You always write so deep. It

This sensational... I have read one like this in a long, very long time. Keep it up. And stop torturing my favorite girl - Luna please...

Chapter 29

You always write such awesome mindfuck, Salon! It

Whoa! What a trippy chapter! I wasn't expecting NONE of that! Very interesting. I really enjoyed the Draco interlude and masturbation scene. Poor Draco. He really wants Ginny bad, huh? His fantasy with the three was really intriguing. I loved that he was OK picturing Harry and Luna together though. That was hot. It is interesting that he kept getting interrupted in doing the task he was assigned to do by his own dad. I wonder what that's all about. I hope going back to school will be a good thing but if you're keeping it canon, perhaps not. This is an interesting development though. The whole thing with concert and Dudders was crazy. But it was a much needed break for all of them. I'm glad Harry and Dudley are bonding and that Harry's reaffirming his bonds with both of his best friends. Can't wait to see where you take it from here. Way to keep it unpredictable and fun, Kitt!

Well after a few weeks of on and off reading I finally managed to completely read both this story and that of 'Boys & Girls' so I thought I really should sign up and review. All in all I think its a pretty amazing piece of work, though I can hardly try and type up all the thoughts I've had over thirty three chapters into one review.

Oddly and sad to say, I actually find the Harry/Luna BDSM stuff is the weakest part for me. Mainly, I think because I'm not into that stuff myself and don't really get it, I suppose. I prefer the BDSM stuff I read to be the lighter more game like stuff Hermione talks about in one chapter... This is a bit weird because I really would have preferred Harry/Luna (Huna/Larry?) over H/Ginny to be canon.

Anyway, what I really do like is the on going povs from characters other than Harry and all the additional scenes added to Deathly Hallows. I'm also a sucker for the WAFF stuff. I was slightly disappoint when Harry and Hermione got it on. It would have been nice to have Ron and Hermione's slowly relationship to be a nice counterpoint to Harry & Luna's mad rush in style.

So really digging the non-sex character stuff more than the sex. :)

Of course I'm back!! Like I'd ever stray from a story like this. ;)

Hehehe.. loved the chapter!! Your version of Dudley is, like, my new favorite character. Also, I get such a total kick when you throw in all these culture references from '98. Its like re-living my senior year in the most awesome way possible. lol

Keep up the great work!