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Wow. Just read chapter 8. Absolutely stunning. You really show Luna's mental state as she is absolutely lost in Harry's dominance and passion. I love the end scene. He's just so wonderfully demanding of her. Gorgeous writing.

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Very nice story so far. Now to find out how to be alerted when the next chapter is uploaded

Chapter 34

Yay! I finally got to read this. As always, I thought it was fabulous!

I think I told you before that you have me very intrigued about what Ginny has in mind for Draco. You write her very cocky and I get this big grin thinking up all the things she might come up with. We already know Draco wants her. Are you considering bringing them together? I would so squee if you did. LOL

I also told you how I feel about Mr. Ollivander. I am a big John Hurt fan. I think he

I'm glad you saved the best part for posting. The Ron/Hermione scene was so full of emotion and realistic, it really made me rethink them as a couple. I love the confession and how Ron pieced it together, I think he would, and I love that he was able to forgive and understand. I just really loved that whole section. But the entire chapter is fantastic. Harry's confession was much needed and I'm so glad he told them, but the revelation that he's been hurting himself was heartbreaking. I hope reuniting with Luna will help him. And Ginny and Neville make quite a team, you've got me looking at all of these characters in completely different ways because of your ability to combine strong canon characterization with a twist of your own. It's really amazing. I can't wait to see what's next. Brilliant as always.

Arf! Arf!

Everytime~!

Now that was a real quality chapter. Well worth the wait. Though the direction you're taking Ginny and Neville is unexpected. (Well Ginny mainly, but both of them smoking to take the edge off is interesting. Where do you get ciggies in the magical world anyway?)

The Ron and Hermione stuff was excellent, as well as the vague tension between all the parties, it's good that not all of it disappears like it did in canon for the most part after Ron came back. And the smut was good to. Very distinct from Harry's stuff.

I'm wondering how big a deviation from Canon, this overheard conversation will lead to? Will it just lead to them saying the name and getting captured on purpose? Or will they instead just be kicking down the door of Malfoy Manor? :D

Awsome chapter. I was afraid that you had dissapeared. Anyway can't wait for the next installment. And Im glad Hermione finally got her affair off her chest now Harry needs the sam thing. Also you've been following the books so far. Are you going to have the trio assault Malfoy Manor or are they going to enter as written by JKI Rowling?
Pete

Great story. I read in record time up to this chapter. I can't believe that I'm totally intrigued with a BDSM story. That prooves, that it don't really matter WHAT you do (or write in that case), but HOW you do it. But sometimes you really scare the shit out of me. The last encounter of Harry and Luna was very hard for me to read. So glad when it ended without severe damage. Dom Harry clashing with Dom Hermione was great. Draco secretly fantasising about beeing sandwiched between Ginny and Harry was great fun.
Keep going.
Thanks for sharing that story with us!

This story is incredible. Hell, it made me and my wife talk about starting a DOM/SUB relationship with one another. This story is very useful in getting in touch with my own inner desires, and it is written wonderfully. I'm a huge Harry/Luna and Harry/Hermione shipper, and I was immensely disappointed with Rowling's final book. You've made not only a better, more engaging story, but you've also made my dreams come true. Thank you.