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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap 16:
Fuck Ginny! I wish Luna had hexed the shit out of her! I hope Harry finds out.
Fuck Ginny! I wish Luna had hexed the shit out of her! I hope Harry finds out.
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19:
I think Hermoine may be jealous!
And I know you hate him, but I like Snape.
I think Hermoine may be jealous!
And I know you hate him, but I like Snape.
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February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4. Nice going, I love the concept of dominance to save somebody. I hope things work out for these two, although I wonder when events will start to change from canon as Harry should be influenced by this relationship. Very well written.
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February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Regarding dialog in chap 6. It was fine, if that is how these characters are. We did not see much of her father in the books so he could be like that. Luna is unusual enough that as she exists in this story, the dialog was fine. Nice masturbating at the end.
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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter 2. Powerful stuff. Great use of metaphors, very intense.
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October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just wow! At last a story that makes Harry a Dom actually credible!! I
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely adored Ginny getting caned. I'm resisting the urge to chant 'more, more, more'. Her pride and fierceness afterwards, particularly her Neville-assisted bad assery was a fantastic compliment to it. But yeah, I just adore the noble leader of the resistance baring her arse as the price for her bravery. Tasty.
Luna's starting to concern me. She feels a little TOO submissive. The necklace was an odd, disturbing touch. Nice speech to Goyle though.
Luna's starting to concern me. She feels a little TOO submissive. The necklace was an odd, disturbing touch. Nice speech to Goyle though.
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June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so hoping for Harry having his way with Ginny. That would be immense. I was also really glad that Harry had clearly arranged a non-verbal safeword. Nice to know he learns from his mistakes.
Everything involving Remus was legendary.
Everything involving Remus was legendary.
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June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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Alas - Ginny Weasley looks likes she may be being set up as villain only. I have to say that I thought the fight scene was well-written. Her anger seemed well-matched to her emotions and canon descriptions of her charcter. As we know from Krum-Gate, she can be cruel and vicious when she feels threatened. Poor girl. And poor Luna, too. What a horrible situation to be stuck in.
Alas - Ginny Weasley looks likes she may be being set up as villain only. I have to say that I thought the fight scene was well-written. Her anger seemed well-matched to her emotions and canon descriptions of her charcter. As we know from Krum-Gate, she can be cruel and vicious when she feels threatened. Poor girl. And poor Luna, too. What a horrible situation to be stuck in.
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13:
Wow. Definitely some of the hottest sex I've ever read. I repeat what I said about your maximising the emotional intensity to incredible levels. With a lot of written porn, there are pretty basic descriptions of sex acts: 'Then Voldemort pushed a plug into Ginny arse, and then he beat her with a tawse, etc.' and whatever level of arousal there is is created by the taboo nature of the acts. In your writing, the arousal comes from the emotions as they weave to astronomical levels in these exceptional, extended scenarios.
Harry's thought to Remus was hysterical. The alpha-male thoughts that followed particularly apt and thought-provoking.
Felt very sorry for Luna.
Wow. Definitely some of the hottest sex I've ever read. I repeat what I said about your maximising the emotional intensity to incredible levels. With a lot of written porn, there are pretty basic descriptions of sex acts: 'Then Voldemort pushed a plug into Ginny arse, and then he beat her with a tawse, etc.' and whatever level of arousal there is is created by the taboo nature of the acts. In your writing, the arousal comes from the emotions as they weave to astronomical levels in these exceptional, extended scenarios.
Harry's thought to Remus was hysterical. The alpha-male thoughts that followed particularly apt and thought-provoking.
Felt very sorry for Luna.