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May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First of all, i`m no native, so please excuse possible mistakes.
This is the first time i review a story.
I`ve spent a lot of time at adffn.net and found this story through accident. Up until now i`ve just read and never registerd or reviewed but your story was so fascinating that i simply had to. It is one of the few stories that are truly great and i`ve enjoyed the last days i`ve spent reading
This is the first time i review a story.
I`ve spent a lot of time at adffn.net and found this story through accident. Up until now i`ve just read and never registerd or reviewed but your story was so fascinating that i simply had to. It is one of the few stories that are truly great and i`ve enjoyed the last days i`ve spent reading
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April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well i saw that one acomin;
I just started readin(just found tha site) nd i am really likin your work, its funny my roommates are in that scene nd its gives me a look into there world so to speak
I just started readin(just found tha site) nd i am really likin your work, its funny my roommates are in that scene nd its gives me a look into there world so to speak
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March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy god you have to continue this story. Found it a few days ago, pretty much read it through in a straight shot. Some of the best characterization I've seen in any fic EVER. The scene with Snape and Luna was utterly fantastic. It's also both rare and welcoming to find an author with such a detailed knowledge of both the psychology and practices of the BDSM community. Breath of fresh air really.
Really hoping you update this gem of a story,
~Hallows Seeker
Really hoping you update this gem of a story,
~Hallows Seeker
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December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, where do I start? This story blows me away, I created an account just so I could review it. I absolutely LOVE it! Luna has always been my favorite Harry Potter character, and like you, when she was introduced in the books I figured her to be a love interest for Harry because she was only too completely perfect. Ginny, pft. Soooooooooo I find this story and i'm smitten from the very start. The BDSM .. well its not really a fancy of mine and some of it (the last H/L encounter) has been a little hard to read. Buuuuuuut you write it so absolutely well I have my suspicions that you MUST be J.K taking a walk on the dark smutty side. I'm almost convinced. I'm sad to see that you haven't updated it in so long and i'm hoping you haven't given up on it. Or Girls & Boys because of course i'm obsessed with that one too. The story just leaves off at such a jumping point and i'm dying for Harry to see Luna again and how you see that encounter happening. My email is SimbiozaDva@gmail.com, could you please add it to your mailing list for when you update? Which I hope is going to be soooooooooooooooooooooooooon. I'm so impatient =\ anyway, thank you for writing this! It gave me the H/L fix i've been searching YEARS for!!
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The the Mods: This review was posted the other day, but was somehow lost. Whether I accidentally deleted it or the reviewer pulled it down, I have no idea, but I am re-posting it from my email alert
Body of review from I Love Luna Lovegood follows:
Okay, Uhmmm Where to start? First off, I absolutely love the story, and this is one of the most well developed Luna/Harry Stories I've ever read. Suffice to say, I registered for this site for the sole purpose of reviewing this story. It is absolutely amazing. Before reading this story I not only didn't really think much of Luna, but I didn't think much of BDSM either. I really enjoy the different spin you put on the whole thing and how cleanly and smoothly you manage to fit such a sensitive, and often misconcieved as violent sexual practice into the wizarding world of Harry Potter and Co. It is wonderful to see such a talented author as well. When I first started reading this yesterday (yes it was so good I stayed up and read the whole thing straight through) I was a bit worried as to how you would keep Luna Lovegood, as a personality, the same, and yet still show the changes that needed to be with respect to all that was going on in-canon and with Harry. I absolutely love the pairing as well, and I think the issue of Ginny was handled fairly well. You also are quite adept at problem-solving. I thought the romance between Ron, and Hermione was almost non-existant especially considering what Harry had done with Hermione yet it was cleaned up quite nicely. I look forward to seeing further developments in their relationship alongside this story. I cannot wait for the trio to rescue Luna. I think it would be good for Harry to have her back. And while this story is characterized by turmoil I know, seeing how you write, that you will manage to fix the Harry Luna situation quite well. If I could make a suggestion, I would like to see a really tender moment between Harry and Luna. I think, that while the sexual scenes play to your strength, it would be great for a relationship development to have them really talk, just once. Just a suggestion, but I think it would be great to read. Please don't stop writing. EVER.
Body of review from I Love Luna Lovegood follows:
Okay, Uhmmm Where to start? First off, I absolutely love the story, and this is one of the most well developed Luna/Harry Stories I've ever read. Suffice to say, I registered for this site for the sole purpose of reviewing this story. It is absolutely amazing. Before reading this story I not only didn't really think much of Luna, but I didn't think much of BDSM either. I really enjoy the different spin you put on the whole thing and how cleanly and smoothly you manage to fit such a sensitive, and often misconcieved as violent sexual practice into the wizarding world of Harry Potter and Co. It is wonderful to see such a talented author as well. When I first started reading this yesterday (yes it was so good I stayed up and read the whole thing straight through) I was a bit worried as to how you would keep Luna Lovegood, as a personality, the same, and yet still show the changes that needed to be with respect to all that was going on in-canon and with Harry. I absolutely love the pairing as well, and I think the issue of Ginny was handled fairly well. You also are quite adept at problem-solving. I thought the romance between Ron, and Hermione was almost non-existant especially considering what Harry had done with Hermione yet it was cleaned up quite nicely. I look forward to seeing further developments in their relationship alongside this story. I cannot wait for the trio to rescue Luna. I think it would be good for Harry to have her back. And while this story is characterized by turmoil I know, seeing how you write, that you will manage to fix the Harry Luna situation quite well. If I could make a suggestion, I would like to see a really tender moment between Harry and Luna. I think, that while the sexual scenes play to your strength, it would be great for a relationship development to have them really talk, just once. Just a suggestion, but I think it would be great to read. Please don't stop writing. EVER.
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So this is my first review, though I began reading your story a while back. I got to the chap where Snape discovers Luna's tattoo then didn't see the rest updates...so I decided to re-read the whole thing. It's really awesome :) sometimes a bit dark (as i'm not too much into bdsm stories) but i really like it, and it's sooo hot. Dom Harry? best idea ever. I love your characters, and the intensity of emotions in which they revolve. I felt horrible when Harry wore the locket with Luna! that was so awful, and I loved how you portray Dudley! it was very nice they met again, and that he's changed into a nice fella, it's a good thing they got a chance to have a good time together. And Ron! oh dear, he was so sweet with Hermione!
I can't wait to see what will happen at the manor. Would you add me to your update-mailing list, please?
Great story. You sure write wonderfully.
I can't wait to see what will happen at the manor. Would you add me to your update-mailing list, please?
Great story. You sure write wonderfully.
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon! Can you email me if you do?
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, this is amazing! You have Harry and Luna's personalities down pat. Unfortunately, I could see Luna letting people do that to her in canon. My poor Luna. :( I'm loving Dom Harry!
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10:
Oh Luna! :(
I love how protective and tender Harry is, even when he's domming.
Oh Luna! :(
I love how protective and tender Harry is, even when he's domming.
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15:
I don't think Harry would be a teen boy if he didn't fantasize about two hot girls together! LOL And, like you, I hated that Harry and Ginny got together in canon, along with Ron/Hermoine. It just doesn't feel like a good fit to me, like a cop out.
I don't think Harry would be a teen boy if he didn't fantasize about two hot girls together! LOL And, like you, I hated that Harry and Ginny got together in canon, along with Ron/Hermoine. It just doesn't feel like a good fit to me, like a cop out.