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Salon Kitty, what an amazing chapter. I can't believe how deep you're going into both Harry and Luna's psyche. I love Harry's demand for Luna to reveal what happened and I can't believe how nonchalant and matter of fact Luna was about what was done to her by the Ravenclaw and Sytherin boys. Draco sucks here! And I think its definitely rape. But I can totally see her going through something like this in canon. You really know these characters well and I love your use of language. OMG, Harry going down on her and taking her, and how she awkwardly almost killed the mood but how he kept going and told her to shut up? PERFECT characterization of both of them. And you still managed to make it so very hot. Very hot. I loved the imagery you gave Harry during the encounter, it rings true considering all that was said and what he had just been through. I love that he realizes what he wants and how it feels dirty but good and innate. This is gonna be a delicious explorations of sexuality, bdsm and emotions and I can't wait for more.

wow........... i mean just....... holy crap that was a perfect mixture of pure emotion and some deliciously twisted erotic fun. the only thing i have to say is ewwww.... slytherin cock.... but other than that it was utterly fantastic. and i think i have the right to be a little distured by even the mere mention of Malfoy's cock. i positivly LOVED it.... is there more.... please let there be more

wow... fantastic start. i've always been partial to harry/luna stories though hardly anyone ever does any. which is why i just joined so i can finally start putting some pairings i've always been partial to up. but wonderful start please please PLEASE keep it coming i love it. im dying to know who the 'others' are

Wow.. There is a lot going on in this story than I originally expected. I'm really impressed. This was an excellent read and I'm really hoping you continue this.

Keep up the excellent work!

i haven't really come to aff in.. well.. forever, but softobsidian74 recc'd your fic on her lj, and i thought i should check it out. and i am very, VERY glad that i did, because this is an amazing fic so far! you are so spot on with your characterizations, it's incredibly believable, and your writing is simply amazing! and so it appears that i will have to come back to aff to read the rest of this fic as you write it!

This is HOT!!!! Very sexy, I can't wait to see where you take this. I love the characterizations. You have both Harry and Luna down perfect. I love that you're picking this up right after the horrible Tower incident. I can't wait to see what they get into....oh and yummy BDSM warnings...Harry the Dom? yesssss....please continue soon : )