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Love this fic, I hope this is strictly Luna/Harry an does not turn into some sort of Harem fic (and please no Ginny, more than enough of those) there are far to few good Lu/H fics out and your is one of the best. So sad Luna may not be able to have a child, but that is not definite is it? The convo between father and daughter was ver believable I had the same sort of relationship with my mother. Keep up the good work.

I love Harry's sneakiness! His planning for Luna's arrival rang true, and I felt like I was sneaking along with him. I love how thorough he tried to get ready for her. He obviously likes her a lot more than just a shag, yet his thoughts of her are so deliciously dirty. Very nice. I love Luna's welcome and how they didn't waste any time getting to it. God, they're hot together. This is so fucking yummy Salon. The way you have him emergining into his dominance is just so natural and RAWR!! I don't think it's possible for you to get carried away, so don't ever worry about that. That ending scene was fucking perfect. Yay for dirty talking. I don't want this to ever stop! Awesome update : ) You have my email....

I'm speechless.....the porn...the fucking porn. You described it perfectly and even more importantly, you described Harry's reaction to it perfectly. I love the way you're taking us with him on this discovery of this hidden side of his sexuality. What shocking images those must have been for him, and every revelation and his reaction to it was just spot on and yummy. I love love his thoughts while he was wanking, he's a natural Dom isn't he? I'm gonna fucking cream on myself. This is probably the best inner dom!Harry analysis I've ever read. Taking notes from you girly. Luna is in trouble! lol. I can't wait...

I liked the tense strain within their open and honest discourse. its an odd relationship that the two of them have and you could really feel his slight discomfort and at the same time his encouragement and support of his daughter as a woman. I thought it was a great moment between them. Awkward but great. Both Lovegoods are so surrounded in whimsy and fantasy that a break into reality seems misplaced, but delightfully real. ^^

Keep up the great work. I love how much of a degenerate Harry is becoming. (I always knew it would be the internet that would be his downfall into depravity. Bwahhahahahaha. hehhehhehehe. =^^= )

Damn Harry is one bad motherfucker!! I can't believe he did that! Wow. I really loved where you took his mind in this chapter, he's so randy and curious and just confused. It all seems so natural. The way he was talking and then doing double action with Ginny and Luna was just masterful. And so well told. lol. I totally broke out in a grin when he let Hermione flitter into his thoughts and then quickly dismissed it. But yes, Harry, show Luna what a dirty boy you are. I'm glad that you're keeping him IC and that he feels some guilt over what's going on, it makes it passionate and compulsive that way. Ginny is true to form, what a piece of work. I can't wait to see how this turns out for them. Especially since really she is his ex now. I love how you're weaving this alongside canon, it really does feel like another perspective of one of the novels, excellent. Oh, and what great usage of actually Brit expressions, it elevates this story above most fan fiction, well that any your way with words. Can't wait to see what Harry and Luna get into next, and if Harry would dare try any of this on Ginny.

Wow. So much has happened in the last two chapters I don't even know where to begin.

You are a phenomenal author and I want you to know that I will be adding this story to my highly recommended list. Keep up the great work!! <3

OMFG! You are so in my head Salon_Kitty...I'm like totally blown away. This was a powerful powerful update and the way Harry has claimed Luna is just SEXY as fuck! I felt so bad that once again she let herself be exploited by the Slytherins, but then Harry comes and rescues her. His response was totally unexpected, especially the slap and the berating, but it was so fucking hot. You've really captured the whole D/s element to their relationship and if this is just the beginning I'm gonna fucking explode. I can't tell you how hot that was, but you probably already knew that. Oh and down with Ginny! lol. Please update this fabulous story soon.

I love this story. ^^

Harry is so bloody sneaky...but still true to his character. I LOVE your Harry...he's everything times ten that I love about the boy. Him going off on Hermione out of frustration was hilarious. And I love how he's noticing Luna in a completely different light now. She is a sorta of sexy character, and the way you're pointing out how quirky and different she is in the midst of all of the rest through Harry's eyes, makes her more so. I love the glimpses into both Harry and Luna's thoughts and background. You're fleshing her out really well and it all rings true. love that she met him with the clear intention of giving him some more. lol. Go Luna! Harry's reaction was perfect, and it seems like they are in the beginning of some thing intense and very satisfying. I do worry about Harry's relationship with Ginny and wonder how all of this is going to be resolved. I personally hope he ditches her. If they get found out its going to be pure scandal and drama. Oh, and Harry in this chapter, although full of drive and pure sexiness, was also very sweet and caring...so IC. He's so complex and I love the way you're writing him, did I say that already? lol. Anyway, great chapter, hot sex, and just great writing.

I didn't really see enough of Ginny to decide whether she was good for him or not, but from what I saw of Hermione and Luna, I think they're my favorite choices for Harry, though more Hermione than Luna.

Please update soon! :)