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Ok, first off, I'm SO glad he and Luna had that conversation about Ginny and that Harry came clean about his feelings on the matter. That was so Harry. I'm so intrigued with how *that* situation will be resolved. I love how Harry has been avoiding Luna giving him head out of fear of disrespecting her or being associated with those others, and I love how she hinted that she thought of him when she was placed in that position. I think the potential for love is great. I hope so anyway. Yay for 69s! lol. But damn Dudders and his cronies. I'm so very worried with how this is gonna end up. I hope Harry kicks his ass if he dares to try to exploit the situation the way the Slytherins have been doing. Really awesome writing as usual. This story makes me happy : )

Bwahahahhahahahaa YES!!

I've been waiting for this. =^^=

Keep up the great work!

Oh bugger you how could you leave suck a fecking cliffie? That was mean beyond reason!...LOL

Seriously though I cannot wait to see what Dudley's reaction is and what happens if and when Vernon and Petunia find out. I wonder if Luna apparently has no trace on her wand she could obliviate Dudley and his cronies? Oh I hope so because I don't want him to go through the embarrassment of copping ribbing from Dudley and then a bollocking from Vernon and Petunia.

I hate the cliffie but love the story!

Well done!

Damn Harry! He's just fucking pushing it and pushing it. I loved the unsure awkwardness and anxiety coming from him as he begins to come into his own as a Dom and exploring some of his desires. The conversation rings true, especially from his end. He's really lucky to have such a secure and trusting submissive as Luna, but she's a natural, isn't she? I love her questioning of him, wanting to know the whys behind his requests, that's fun stuff because its true that a submissive wants to be just as much in the head of her dom as he does her. Very nice at the end. Harrys a love machine. I love it. Close call there with Dudders...glad they weren't discovered. And I really really love Harry's embarassment/shame at what he was doing and Luna's reassurances. Very good chapter Salon. This story is not only hot but really rings true of teenage exploration of bdsm : )

Excellent chapter. Keep up the great work!

Really phenomenal story here. Curious why Harry hasn't let Luna go down on him, but I guess you'll get to that soon. Keep up the good work.

lol They're quite loud.

Maybe, once Harry looses his restraint in a loud nightly tryst of passion, Vernon will kick him out and he can go live with Luna. >:) hehehe..

HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT. oh sweet fuck. the sex was amazing.

Oh hell yeah I'd like to be on your updates list! I'm not a huge one for the Harry/Luna pairing but I like the way you've written it. My email is ratscentral@hotmail.com

Thanks!

i need another chapter soon please.