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How shocked were you when the owl died in the last book? I remember reading that and getting so upset, but then when I tried to find people to sympathize I got nothing but indifference! I'm sorry, but that moment caught me so quick and so off guard! :(

Oh well. Next chapter is at the burrow!! Harry gets to see Luna again! I loved that scene when they go to Luna's home. I can't wait to see what you do with it.

Keep up the great work!

good good now the master lets some of the demons out of his closet. and you did bring up a very interesting point in all seven books never once did Harry mention to his two bests friends any details of how he grew up. obviously its a weird conversation to start off "Oh yeah guys, by the way, before we solve another mystery i just have to say that i lived in a closet for 10 years.". this trust that Harry and Luna are building with each other is the same kind of love that i dream i'll find one day. truly letting the other into their hearts.......... not sure if that made sense. and don't worry about making me cry its just that Luna's story hit me with the force of 100 Law and Order SVU episodes with a side of A Time To KIll.

Also, i always imagined Dudley smoked up.......... i also always thought that if anyone should be able to get stoned every once in a while it should be Harry The Constant Hero. I love the building friendship between Harry and Dudders........... do i see a bonding moment involving lots of booze and weed.

Lastly the smut as always is amazingly fitting to the emotional development of Harry and Luna's relationship..........oh yeah and incredibly HOOOOTTTT!!!

i can't wait to see how the others react to luna and harry. it's a little odd that his aunt and uncle are gone like all the time. update soon please.

Ha! I knew Luna would uncover the truth some how. (What a kinky way to get into slapping eh? Wink wink, nodge nodge, say no more.) ;)

Hehehe. I greatly enjoyed breakfast with the Dudders. Keep up the great work!

Awesome. I love that Luna is coming to some realizations about herself and how she's responding to Harry, I love that they're talking about it. Her waking up to him staring at her and her fears was so real, especially after what she had just told him. I LOVED Harry's reassurance to her that she is girlfriend material, and I hope he does take up with her when all of this over with. I still can't wait to see that go down. What I really love is how we're seeing Luna through Harry's and Dudley's eyes and how unfair and misguided the other kids at school look because of it. She's hot : )And Yay for deep throating, go Luna! I envy her. lol. I love how hot you're making their sex but still very natural and normal for their age and development. The stuff with Dudley is just so funny/cute/awkward. It refreshing to read. The whole breakfast scene was just priceless. Now the spanking scene....wow. I love the psychology and how you even build up to that scene...so freakin' hot and cathartic I'm sure for Harry after what happened to him. Very nice : ) More please : )

Oh thank god. I was really fearing for the worst there for a while that it was her father that had raped her. In a weird twisted way this chapter was quite a relief.

Over all fantastic chapter. I like Dudley throwing out the olive branch and I really admire what you did with Luna's confession.

Keep up the excellent work.

the bonding between Harry and Dudley was so wonderful and realistic but......... well lets just say that thats the the first time i cried in three years

Wow Kitty...I'm very impressed. That was so erotic, and intense, and heartbreaking. How did you manage to do that all in one chapter? I'm glad that Harry and Dudley seemed to have reached an understanding, I hope Dudley sticks to his word. It's a nice place for them. But everything after that...when Harry returned to the room, tying Luna up like that and gagging her, the passion...the intensity, that just blew me away. So fucking hot the way she surrendered to him. And then the conversation afterwards. I'm speechless. I can totally see something like that happening to her, and I can see Mr. Lovegood clearly in my mind, having the second love of his life destroyed and losing his mind for it...so tragic. This will only bring Harry and Luna closer, I'm so glad she shared that with him. I can't wait to see if she uses Harry's teaching/advice to protect herself from now on, and how Harry will manage to stay in touch with her while he's away. I'm worried about what's to come, but excited as well. What an excellent story, you're making me fall in love with the Harry/Luna ship all over again. I had lost hope. Update soon!

This story is brilliant.

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