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Yeah, Ron's a good guy and all, but I really hope you don't put Hermione with him. I hate it when they spoil a great story like that.

Heh, I think Harry's a bit drunk off the post-coital high too. =^^=

Also, in regards to stories and the reading of them... I'm not partial to any particular pairing or sexual orientation when it comes to stories. For me, its all about the plot. The smut is a nice after thought. (The vast majority of my Recommended Reads are long stories.) Something about the plot needs to catch my attention. While I admit, some pairings come out better than others, its up to the author to make it work.

Things that are too OOC always annoy me, though.

Keep up the great work!

This is a pairing I've never read before, but I love Luna, and Harry, well, he's just Harry!!

I'm really enjoying it so far - that was some hot action there. But i feel sad for both of them - they're so messed up.

That was insanity!!! First of all, I really appreciate the feel of your writing. I've told you before, but when I'm reading this story, in many parts, I feel like I'm reading a Harry Potter book. Now that's hard to pull off. There's a richness to the dialogue and descriptions you give that carry a novel feel and stay devoted to canon in many ways. I love that. The whole Ron and Hermione discussion cracked me up. Of course Hermione would have read up on S&M, I like how she knows about it, but is still innocent and very curious in many ways. I love that she and Ron both confessed their virginity and their almost moment. I was very mad at Kreacher for interrupting. The section on Harry coming to the door nude was FUNNY! He's got some bollocks...pun intended. I'm with Ron, what if that had been Hermione, would he even have cared? His head is getting a little swollen but that's realistic too with all of the power Luna is giving him. And WOW, their sessions are getting more and more intense and experimental. That was just fucking insane. lol. I love him smacking her jaw a bit and correcting her. My personal kink. Oh and about your poll, what draws me to a fic is the summary first of all, then the pairings, and finally the warnings : ) I'm a bit worried about Luna. She's really falling deep, and Harry's about to go on his mission, and now she can't even hang with Ginny. I hope Neville is a good friend to her, she'll really need it. The whole scene with Harry feeding Luna on his lap was nuts, and only shows how absorbed Harry is in his new little kingdom where he's in control and has a faithful subject of one. lol. Poor Ron. lol. I really got a kick out of his inner thoughts here. And wow at Luna being in subspace like that for that long....Harry did her proper, eh? *SWOON*

Heh, Lupin sounds like a desperate man trying to get out of a desperate situation. He failed miserably.


Also, love the way Harry broke the news to Hermione. lol
Keep up the great work!

Oh, my FUCKING GOD!!!! I have NEVER read anything like that before in my life. THAT was incredible. Wow!!

First of all, LOL@Hermione's POV in this chapter. That was just SO Hermione, you have her character down. Often, we like to sexualize and girl her up in fanfiction, but she really isn't a girly girl at all and she's every bit as investigative and bossy as you portrayed her without going overboard. Great job on that. I love how you're keeping Ron pretty smart too, he has his clueless moments, but he's a pretty smart bloke, but seeing him through Hermione's eyes is hilarious. My favorite line is when she's annoyed Harry gets away from her grilling but she turns and realizes that Ron is there and he's not going anywhere. lol.

The fight, the fucking fight! Intense. You know JKR totally annihilated Remus in DH IMO, and you brought all of my disappointment and frustration with the man back tenfold. But then you flipped it and made me root for him as well. ^5 for manning Remus up. I love his raw energy and gall to take Harry on like that. I thought they were going to come to blows. Hermione would so act the way she did, so thank goodness for that. But in the end, Remus running up the stairs and slamming the door just made me feel pity for him.

LOL@Harry in this entire chapter, from him staring down Remus to him turning to Hermione and basically saying, "yeah, I'm fucking Luna and its pretty kinky, what?" He was just so badass but still in character. You do his voice well. Speaking of which, I LOVE LOVE LOVE how we're getting in Harry's head during his sessions with Luna. Its rare that the Dom's perspective is shown, and its very insightful and rings very authentic. I'm really impressed with this story all around.

That last scene BLEW ME AWAY. I don't even know where to began. I mean, Luna's trust and submission to Harry is HOT but Harry's need and his own submission to her through his dominance is HOTTER. The caning was rough stuff but you made it so cathartic. It was a like a seal on what they are now. I love that they're both coming into it more assured. And OMG, Luna is a trooper...that's all I have to say. 20 strokes with a cane is no joke but with the clamps too? Damn. That's love. I love Harry's thoughts about her before the caning and how he knows that his whole world would go to shit if something happened to her, yet he can't push her away like he did Ginny. There were so many great lines in this chapter, but one that sticks in my memory is when he said Luna was more than just a great idea....That was beautiful. Yeah, she's fucking real, what they have is real, and you've really made it come to life. I'm so happy Harry's love for her overrode his guilt and fear about the Ginny/Luna confrontation. His response was perfect. She so needed to be comforted. And the fisting...omg, Kitty, I don't even like fisting but that was sexy and damned near spiritual! The fact that Harry cried afterwards just made it that much more powerful. And Yay for her calling him Master and for him calling himself that as well. I loved that he's taking risks and she's not only accepting it but loving it. Loved the dirty talk, but you knew that. So so hot.

This was just a brilliant chapter Kitty, probably one of the BEST BDSM stories I've ever read, and definitely the best coming of age BDSM story I've read. Seriously.

I'm sorry if I came across overly critical last chappie review, I honestly didn't mean to sound like that.

But WOW how hot was that chapter? And the emotional angst! A lovely meaty chappie!

Can't wait for the next update, you're doing such a GREAT job!

Well done as usual and keep it up!

Just so you know this fic does rock my world....LMAO! I like the emotional complexity of all the characters though Ginny was a tad OOC for my usual tastes, but you did warn us all and while I think her reaction wasn't to my view of Ginny she is fiery and does have the capacity to be a bitch.

Great fic and I very much look forward to the next chappie whenever that shall be.

Well done!

wow...................... im not quite sure how to respond to that............ do i really seem like that much of a girl................... i can actually feel my masculinity decreasing. no kitty i am not a woman i am sort of a man................. at least thats what i thought........ but you have proven me wrong. yeah but seriously im a guy its just that my brother is 10 years older than me so he's always been more of a parent like thing and at the time i told my bro about my eliminated virginity i was 14 and he was 24 so that only added to the awkwardness as i wasn't really all that suave and confident at the time and that is where the awkwardness came from b/c i was telling my WAY older bro/authority figure about his hs freshman bro was quickly progressing on the road to manhood. looking back now it's kind of funny............................. but yeah im not a woman. though there are days.......... like when i watch Homeward Bound and Shadow runs over the hill that i cry like a baby......... but that doesnt make me a woman just kinda sensitive............ i think.......... yeah. but anyways bitchin chapter that confession scene was kind of like watching a train crash in slow motion like oh shit here comes the agony. but hey at least the truth is out there now..... i just hope that Ginny isn't a complete fuck off and tries to get revenge on luna.................. why do i feel a 'no comment' coming on. oh and one Alan Rickman/Snape 40 yo virgin face coming up........ i just gotta figure out a way to get Greasy in the poster so it looks natural. keep it cuming kitty kat

Coco

P.S im definetely a man

Whoa man...I was NOT expecting ANY of that. Fucking KICKASS...not Ginny slapping Luna, cause that shit was out of order, although, understandable (I do wish Luna would have slapped her back) but the fact that Ginny now know what's up. HAHAHA, in your face biatch!! Why was that so satisfying. I'll tell ya, cause Ginny was being herself, a grade A vindictive self centered little.... The way she was ragging on Luna was not cool at all, but oh so in character and typical of a teenage girl was is about to lose the best fucking thing she ever had. OK, now I'm a bit worried about how Harry will react to the fact that Luna and Ginny had this "talk". And how disturbing is it that Draco glamoured Luna's hair red to pretend it was Ginny sucking him off? That's wild. I can see him doing that though. Poor Luna, she's sorta like a spectator in her own life, if you know what I mean. I feel like so much of her is locked up in this shell because of all that's gone on in her life, but it makes her deeply introspective and wise. You're doing an excellent characterization. I think this is the best Luna I've ever read, even better than JKR's. Great rendering of the interrogation at the Weasley's, I had forgotten all of that. You're making me want to read DH again. Sigh...so this revelation of Luna's love for Harry is pretty much public now, I mean, Remus, Ron, Ginny, her father...it's hit the fan, and I hope that Harry handles this properly..I mean he has a lot on his shoulders, and he will want to protect Luna the way he protected Ginny, but I hope that doesn't mean pushing her away the same way. He really does need her. I guess Remus has figured that out. BTW, really appreciate Remus having "the talk" with Luna about her power to say no. Nice touch, and it needed to be said. Can't wait to see the next development and what advice Remus needs Luna's presence for in order to help Harry hear him better. Exciting update, Kitty.