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Oh no!!! who is that? I hope Ron didn't get himself into some shit. AWESOME recreation of the fight that spurred Ron's departure. I really enjoyed the Trio's exploration of each other, it felt like really authentic just how the Trio would engage sexually if they were driven to it. I loved Hermione's thoughts and fears and lol@Ron's monstercock : ) I was shocked at Harry's boldness with Ron but that was hot...he's just really randy, eh? I loved how he just went into a trance when talking about Luna and their response to hearing about him and Luna engaging in anal. This somehow adds more substance to what Ron sees in the locket scene in DH with his paranoia about Harry and Hermione. I agree with you, there was so much more to be said and done while they were in the Forest of Dean....LOVED your version. Bravo, can't wait to see who's discovered Ron. Excellent update, as usual. : )

This story's awesome :-) More harry/luna coming up, I hope - it's really a fun exploration of a d/s relationship.

This story just gets better and better. After I had read the whole of Chapter 21 I couldn't wait to read the next bit. I can't wait for you to update. I was just so immersed in the events that were occuring in the tent(truth game with firewhiskey), and I couldn't believe it when the chapter was over. I think it is great that you have added lots of sexual tension not just with Harry, but with Ron and Hermione too.

Can't wait to read more
Please update very soon

Man on man this fic is amazing! And Harry, Ron and Hermione getting freaky whoo hoo!....lmao. I'm glad you had Harry and Luna meet up and that their need for each other gets stronger and stronger every day, it's kinda sweet.

Can't wait for the next chappie, well done!

Personally, I didn't even realize you had an update schedule. I say post whenever you finish, but since this site does not have a story update notification system in place that allows you to follow your favorites, I suppose I could see the value of sticking with a single day so your updates are easier to find. :P


Also: Holy crap!! I can't believe you're gonna pull off a group circle jerk of sorts. LMAO. I was all like "WHAT?! O_O OMGWTFAWESOMENESS!!!!" lol

Keep up the great work!

Wow, I always think it cant get any better...... and then go figure it gets better. Id be perfectly happy with you updating every day, but somehow I dont think you can write that fast. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Absolutely amazing story. I can't wait for you to update since I'm stuck waiting till August for SoftO to update "Bound By Duty" *cry*. I love the idea of Harry and Luna, Im attempting to write a Harry,Luna,Hermione story meself but its not going too well

Yea, i'll be expecting a Harry by FedEx please and thank you! Dear me that was hot! I love Hermione's inner monologue and the way you weave canon into your story! I'm fine with the Sunday updates, gives me something to look forward to! Excellent job, as always!

HaHa. Good one. She didn't get raped again. I liked what you made Luna and the others do to the boys before they left. I'm still unsure as to whether Ginny has forgiven Luna yet. And I wonder how Harry managed to get the coins to work and wonder where they're going to meet. I think Hermione will disapprove.

Keep up the good work
Update soon

Very interesting developments. Ginny's caning was just...wow. That was hard to read. I love the way you're telling the events at the castle while the Trio is out horocrux hunting. I always wanted to know what happened and JKR only hinted at it. This all feels very real and true to the books, and decidingly frightening. Ginny's humiliation was just ...DAMN. That was hard to read, even though I don't like her, that's just fucking wrong. I wanted to slap that Carrow bitch. I like seeing all of this through Luna's eyes, especially in light of her new interests. Now, you scared me to death when Terry and Anthony came up to Luna and the ensuing confrontation. I was like 'oh no here we go again'. That was an emotional rollercoaster for the reader. My heart sank when she woke up with those boys around her in the RoR. I'm so happy Ginny and Neville came through, I had a little hope they might. lol@at their plan to set those assholes up. Good thinking. I thought everything rang true to everyone's character, especially Neville and Ginny. I like how you're showing a more confident and outspoken Neville. God, he's so hot in DH : ) And I'm glad Ginny, although still upset, knows where her loyalties should lie. I'm a bit worried about Ginny to be honest. I hope she's gonna be OK...geez, now that's a testament to your writing. I actually care about the bint. : ) I found one error, at least I think it was: She had watched Neville and Luna during dinner as usual, noticing for the first time how Ginny