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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kitty, this really is an amazing piece of work you have going on here. I agree with PE, the way you're using canon to tell your story WHILE you fill in gaps that JKR didn't share is just brilliant. I love your take on what was going down in the school while the Trio was on their horocrux hunt. I can so see all of this happening, especially with the Carrows at the helm and with Snape having his hands tied so to speak. I love Luna's perceptive ability, it's one of her most awesome characteristics. This chapter had me biting my nails, very intense and gripping. But go Luna for setting that bitch straight. lol@ "No, I
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I never would have expected the Carrows to be so sexual. I liked the way you brought Snape back onto the good side by suggesting to Luna to steal Gryffindor's sword. I'd love to see Ginny and Luna talk about how Harry and Luna ended up sleeping with each other. I hope the DA reform and have a massive gangbang lol. Btw I'm loving these two part chapters. It's like double the fun in one chapter.
Can't wait to read more
Please update very soon.
Can't wait to read more
Please update very soon.
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved your take on what was going on inside the school. The scene with Snape and Luna was great. I love how she picked up on his actual nature rather than Harry's perception of 'obvious villian.' Although this chapter answers NOTHING regarding what happened to Ron! The cliff hanger remains!
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
;aljdfoprthkal;dsjhflskj;afj You are a fricking genius! The way you weave canon.............how you give us a glimpse of the "missing" moments when the trio were on the hunt.........*ded* Honestly woman, you kill me!
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I am so inlove with this fic! I hope Ginny gets her own back on Carrow and that Luna, Neville and Ginny can kick arse with the D.A let the revoloyution begin!...LOL
Simply lovely fic dear and I can't wait for the next update!
Keep up the good work!
Simply lovely fic dear and I can't wait for the next update!
Keep up the good work!
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey there sexy. ok so im guessing you know who this is [insert evil laugh here]the three of us have just finished reading the latest and i have to say we all loved it which is clearly evidenced by the fact that that the whore fuckslut i live with is currently trying to fuck her masters cock off and i will be a touch upset if she dosn't leave any for me ...
seriously tho you asked Josh for me to leave a review so hear goes i love it. the place your going with Snape is interesting and Ginny's issues are great, really believable, im not so sure about the whole threesome in the tent thing tho it did lead into Ron leaving fairly well. and i have to say i love Hermione's reaction to seeing Harry and Luna.. i guess me being the romantic that i am i would have liked to see Hermione and Ron finish up the truth/dare game fucking like bunnies as harry sat on guard smiling like a mad thing. perhaps a little ooc for Hermione but then again this is Fannon so who knows.
The ideas you and Josh were talking about with Ginny getting her stomp on with Mr nasty DE are ok i guess but i think you need to wait till later. well thats if you go with the Ginny/Luna visit harry thing. im also wondering how Hermione is going to deal with her now outed sexuality ok so perhaps not fully outed but at least awoken. i can see a few way that it could go and all be within the bounds of the story.
i love the tattoo and piercing ideas but im sorry josh has some really fucken hot plans for Different in terms of bodymod (so hot that im jucing up thinking about them) though i have to say he probably just gets the ideas from looking at me. Although if he goes ahead with the magical/muggle brand idea that will be ground breaking. ok so enough about my dreams there and back to you.
yep love it, all good, its not predictable at all which is a huge plus (almost as bug as Ron apparently what made you make Ron a sizable chap and is Hermione creaming herself dreaming of getting that stuffed into her or arm i just getting horny again)
ok anywho sexy im off to find an electrical boyfriend till the sluts finished then im gonna see what i can get myself... wish me luck ... oh and i think Different will be out soon (glares at Josh)
seriously tho you asked Josh for me to leave a review so hear goes i love it. the place your going with Snape is interesting and Ginny's issues are great, really believable, im not so sure about the whole threesome in the tent thing tho it did lead into Ron leaving fairly well. and i have to say i love Hermione's reaction to seeing Harry and Luna.. i guess me being the romantic that i am i would have liked to see Hermione and Ron finish up the truth/dare game fucking like bunnies as harry sat on guard smiling like a mad thing. perhaps a little ooc for Hermione but then again this is Fannon so who knows.
The ideas you and Josh were talking about with Ginny getting her stomp on with Mr nasty DE are ok i guess but i think you need to wait till later. well thats if you go with the Ginny/Luna visit harry thing. im also wondering how Hermione is going to deal with her now outed sexuality ok so perhaps not fully outed but at least awoken. i can see a few way that it could go and all be within the bounds of the story.
i love the tattoo and piercing ideas but im sorry josh has some really fucken hot plans for Different in terms of bodymod (so hot that im jucing up thinking about them) though i have to say he probably just gets the ideas from looking at me. Although if he goes ahead with the magical/muggle brand idea that will be ground breaking. ok so enough about my dreams there and back to you.
yep love it, all good, its not predictable at all which is a huge plus (almost as bug as Ron apparently what made you make Ron a sizable chap and is Hermione creaming herself dreaming of getting that stuffed into her or arm i just getting horny again)
ok anywho sexy im off to find an electrical boyfriend till the sluts finished then im gonna see what i can get myself... wish me luck ... oh and i think Different will be out soon (glares at Josh)
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Smut was very good in Chapter 22. Wow, did Harry just get caught up in the heat of the moment or does he swing both ways? I read your little entrance to the chapter so I've got a feeling I know what's going to happen in the next chapter. Harry/Hermione;). I'm looking forward to it.
Can't wait to read more,
Please update very soon.
Can't wait to read more,
Please update very soon.
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yet another amazing chapter. Being a guy I could see how Ron would get totally put off by Harry doing what he did, but also being an open bi I can see how Harry could just get caught up in the heat of the moment and try something he'd thought about for a while without even realizing it. I've never been very good at expressing myself so basically I thought the whole chapter rocked and I hope to see more Harry/Hermione, screw Ron
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Great chapter!! I loved the wrath of Ron!
Also, Harry really pushed things over the line when he sucked of his very homophobic best friend. He was already pushing it with the handjob. ^^ lol Although I loved the fact that Harry's slipping into that same post coital haze that Luna seems to fall into. They're quite the pair. lol
Although you end with a cliff hanger??!! OMG!!! You're not updating for weeks!! Gah! What ever shall I do?!
Keep up the great work! <3
Also, Harry really pushed things over the line when he sucked of his very homophobic best friend. He was already pushing it with the handjob. ^^ lol Although I loved the fact that Harry's slipping into that same post coital haze that Luna seems to fall into. They're quite the pair. lol
Although you end with a cliff hanger??!! OMG!!! You're not updating for weeks!! Gah! What ever shall I do?!
Keep up the great work! <3
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG@ Part I. This story is getting wild! But it still weaves in canon and the characters are still amazingly in tact so I'm down. Wow@all the business going on in the tent! and outside of it. You had me cracking up several times. Poor Harry and his needs and that damned locket! You capture this period for the Trio perfectly. I loved Luna and Harry's time together and I'm so glad she got pierced, tattoed, and got a special gift. Just wow. And the fact that Hermione got to see all of that and it sparked this whole nother dynamic between her and Harry is SEXY as hell. I loved the UST. So damned hot. You had me laughing out loud at Hermione thinking about Harry being more attractive, especially when she thought this drawing up a chart (a CHART! swoon) LOL!! that's just so Hermione. Great stuff. The idea of Harry wanking and speaking parseltongue just does it for me : ) Loved the truth game and I wait to see if they're really gonna do this circle jerk thing. NUTS. LOVE it so much. Great chapter.