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wow so hot ... i love the fire in Ginny of course im a little upset hary didnt end up fucking the stuffing out of Ginny but the rest of it was hot and as believable as all hell. i cant wait to see wher you take ginny now that she has what i hop is a taste for the power that the life can bring .. and i can see Luna beocmming firmly attached to Ginny as her mistress when harry's not available... yet another one of those things that i have seen in my time in the lifestyle...

you know i think i love the way your characters are kinda uncertain in their actions and groping about through the introduction and the feelings that can be bought up in the lifestyle. im also wondering wher your ging with Hermione and Ron assuming that your loosely sticking to cannon with Rons return to the Trio. i want to see Hermione and hr get to the nasty as well tho i have a feeling im dreaming ahin with that ... tho in the not dreaming realm i can see hermione wanting to know how this works for harry..

oh well me and the girls love it even if M dosent want to admit it.
love to you from Pet and me

Madness! LOL.Ginny and Luna are hot together, but LMAO at Harry refering to his cock as "Chosen cock". someone is getting a little full of themselves, eh? I enjoyed Luna's punishment, even if Ginny did not. lol. Hopefuly the DA meetings will resume properly and Ginny can get some revenge and protection. Very interesting and fun update.

Ha! Ginny's hello was priceless. ^^

I've personally never been much for yuri, but I have to say I loved the scene between Luna and Ginny on the bed. Very sensual and comforting. Although I suppose if I had to go through what Ginny was, I might be seeking the comfort of another woman too. I've never been so skeeved after reading what you wrote about that creepy pervy Carrow. Eww..gross!! lol

Keep up the great work!

I just can't get enough of this story. The stuff that Carrow did to Ginny was pretty disturbing. But I loved the part where Ginny and Luna got off with each other. Especially the bit where Ginny rode Luna's face. I really cannot predict what is going to happen in the next chapter. I don't know if Harry is going to be angry or happy Luna brought Ginny along. I can't tell whether Harry is going to fuck both Ginny and Luna. And is Hermione going to get involved or will she just be watching again? Or will Hermione get off with Harry in private in the tent when Ginny and Luna leave? And it's going to be Ginny's first time too. I just cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm dying with anticipation here.

Please update very soon.

See, you have got to stop writing because YOU ARE BLOWING MY MIND!!!!! Poor Ginny having to go through all of that! Her emotions are on a roller coaster, and WHAT. A. RIDE! Man, I can't wait to see what happens with the 3 of them, I could speculate, but I'll just wait not so patiently until the next update! And Ronnikins! Oh, that poor dear! That time away is good for him though, looking forward to his new attitude about "everything" when he gets back! As always, awesome!

You keep surprising me with where you're taking this story...incredibly unpredictable yet it's all credible. lol. Whoa and the frank conversation between Luna and Ginny and where it ended up. that was really intense. Ginny is a total domme, which fits her personality. It's so sick what Carrow has been doing to her. I hope he gets his. LOL@Ginny punching Harry...he did have that coming. looking forward to seeing if Harry arranges a threesome with his former girlfriend and current one. That would be wild indeed. I think he can handle it though : ) Not sure if Ginny can..lol. Yay for Ron and Bill...he needed that. I loved how you delved into his insecurities and fears. Great update.

I LOVE this fic, and can't wait to see what happens with the 3 of them!

I'm glad that you missed me. lol. I'm jus wondering where you're planning to take this story. And as for the couples I'm not sure who's gonna end up with who. For some reason I have a feeling that Luna's gonna die and Harry and Ginny are going to be together. The interaction with the Trio(Ron, Hermione, and Harry) made me feel squiken(Sp?) I don't know why. I probably would've liked it better if it was just Harry and Hermione. I really don't like Ron, so I'm hoping in that aspect you'll veer from the book and kill him off. I can't wait for the next chapter and Harry's reaction to Ginny being there.

can't wait for the next chapter and what im sure will be more yummy luna/ginny with hopefully a lot of Harry thrown in there. I'd love the idea of making Harry watch while the girls do whatever they please

ok initial review of this chapter places you deep into the writer of evil cliffies group

though in all seriousness i like it, ill post another review later with a more in depth review when i have had time to read it a couple more times.