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Un that was a bit full on! Not to my usual taste but it was very well written and I look forward to the next chappie.

Well done

Well I've finally gotten up to speed with the story. I sort of wanted to wait until the end to make sure that I wouldn't be dissapointed, and I can honestly say that I wasn't. I've read a lot of fics that start out great and by the middle I just get so sick and frustrated with it.
However you have done a very good job with this one. Actually I think your style of writing is one of the best I've seen. Your chapters flow very well, the sex scenes are very well written and thought out, and I'm constantly drawn to what your going to write next I don't feel the need to skip through in order to move on.
When you finish this story I'd very much like it if you let me know when you start your Harry/Bella story or any other fic you start.
So once again great story and I look forward to another great chapter.
Pete

POW.ER.FUL! I can't even think straight right now! The comfort they tried and failed to glean from each other is just....woah! Once again, Dom!Harry blows my mind! *standing ovation*

WOW is probably all I can say. I think I can say that this is my favourite chapter yet. I was expecting the Harry/Hermione to be a one off. But when they started engaging in their activities more often and when they were so close to sex by the end of the chapter, I wanted more. I didn't think that they would actually go all the way and have sex, but because they were so close to it, it opened new doors. Now I think that there is a chance that they might have sex. Maybe after the Godric's hollow visit. Maybe even before, if they think they might die on the visit to Godric's Hollow. Will Harry give in to Hermione's demands? That question will have to wait. And I cannot wait for it to be answered.

Keep up the good work on your amazing story,
Please update very soon

Wow. Such a powerful, emotionally intense chapter. Hermione really knows how to compartmentalize, doesn't she?

I really overall enjoyed this chapter. Hermione was pretty selfish in using Harry to suit her own needs. She really doesn't like to give an inch. Although everybody needs their coping methods I guess. I think, much like Harry, that she isn't one to let on as much when she's terribly scared and I loved her shout of desperation at the end. Although she obviously isn't remembering the number one rule of horror movies (and lets face it, their situation is horrible): the girl who doesn't want to die a virgin usually gets her wish by generally dying after being seen on screen having sex. lol

I think my favorite part of the chapter was the two of them opening up to each other. I think you hit Hermione's back story and experience right on the nose. Keep up the fantastic work!

I'm not even going to lie, my eyes were welling up with tears when Harry was telling Ginny that he was with Luna. God! How humiliating to be told that IN FRONT of the man you love(d) new girlfriend! Luna's punishment was amazing, as was all of it! Oh, Harry, what a creative little bugger! I sooo can't wait to see what you have next for us! I'm super curious to see if you're going to eventually whip this around and make it Harry/Ginny canon, but with this wild ride, I hardly care!!! WHEEEEE!

Well, Well, Well. I certainly wasn't disappointed in this chapter. The smut was just amazing. It was very detailed. I'm glad you never made it too brief. Lol at Ginny sucking Harry's balls. The only part that I think was missing is what happens between Harry and Hermione while Ron is gone. Oh well I'll just have to wait until the next chapter. Like you said yourself you didn't buy it when nothing happened between Harry and Hermione while Ron wasn't there.

Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more,
Please update very soon.

That was just brilliant - love the story, I'm eager to see where it's all going (and what sex they'll have along the way!)

Whooooaaaaaaaaaa doggie!! lol That was freaking great!! And what a good way to get everything out in the open. ^^ That was a hell of a threesome! My god. And so quickly updated too.

I feel like its Christmas!
Keep up the great work!

I like Ron for his humor and he makes me laugh, but I don't like him in general. I find his character very immature. And in many of the books he throws hissy fits, and I'm like dude! man up! I just don't understand how Hermione who's intelligent would be with someone who's like a kid. His emotional depth really isn't there. And I liked the idea of Hermione with someone who will challenge her intellectually and push her to be her best, and support her. Ron mocks her throughout the entire series. As for this chapter I'm like in your face Ginny! Sure she gets pleasure but uh-uh no "Chosen cock" for you. I can't wait for the next chapter.