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Wow great chapter and very dark. There is just something about the way I picture Harry like this that sends chills down my spine. If JK Rowling had written a chapter like this I'm not sure I could have continued. Obviously Harry will come out of this, and Hermione could definatly use Ron's company right now. I wonder what Ron would say if he saw this part of Harry?
Good job until next time.
Pete

[Ch 1] oh! my. well, THAT was a surprise from miss luna, certainly. the last thing i expected. and she's so matter-of-fact about it. the great thing about luna is that that dreamy smile of hers can conceal any number or kind of thoughts

[Ch 2] interesting that harry is growing angry with luna for not being as angry about the boys

[Ch 3] i absolutely adore luna

I liked this chappie much more than the last one and palpably feel Harry and Hermione's emotions as they go on with the journey. And I can't wait to see how you introduce the sword and how Ron comes back into the story (He does come back into the story doesn't he?...LOL)

BTW you are evil for leaving us with that cliffie....damn you!...LMAO!

Great chapter. Is Harry really loosing it? He is starting to seem like the horcrux has almost completly taken over. Definatly looking forward to the next instalment.
By the way I read this Harry Fleur story called 'The Lie I've Lived' by 'JBern' not sure whether or not you like the pairing but the story is great. Very well written. Also what did you think of the finaly of 'Bella's Harem'?
See you next time.
Pete

5 stars for this chapter. I liked the fact that Harry and Hermione had sex. I was disturbed by the way Harry treated Hermione afterwards but I wasn't that shocked tbh. He must have felt used by Hermione along with everything else that was going on. I was surprised at Hermione taunting him about Luna and then Harry pinning her down. That was another great scene. And I can't wait to find out how Luna is going to react to finding out about H/Hr. And what happened to the locket? hmmmmmmm. Can't wait for more Harry/Luna and I hope there are going to be more threesomes/moresomes.

...godDAMN, I love this fic. Seriously, coming home and seeing a new chapter made my night.

Been following for awhile now and this has quickly become one of my favourite Harry/Luna fics, certainly one of the most memorable fanfics I've read, of any pairing. The first few chapters were a bit of struggle to overcome, what with the whole Luna revelation. Too many fics out there are just a mix of shit writing, cheap, transparent angst and unjustified Mary Su/Gary Stu-ness, but to think I'd have missed out the best.. and only, admittedly, Harry/Luna BDSM fanfics I'll probably ever read. Unimaginable! ....and the author has great taste in music, what a plus!

In summary, this story is a fucking hoot and I eagerly look forward to any updates.

*sighs* Sry I wasn't clear with it (take into account my status as rabid h/hr/(female moresome if possible)) but I rly didn't like the way it turned out between them. I can understand the h/l ship and I was reading the story and enjoying that portion immensely. I just saw no need to take the h/hr action in such a dark direction. I'd rather have seen a jkr moment pulled where h/hr stayed purely platonic the entire time than almost rape :-(. I sincerely believe they could have had encounters that while not culminating in love most certainly didn't have to end like that regardless of hoxcrux influence or not due to the strength of H/Hr long-term friendship, hell for the sake of that I'd wager that even Hr would be a lot more submissive just for him. Thats my clarified .02 cents carry on and ignore this rant :-)

*deadpans* no, no, not at all... *highly disappointed in how it was handled*