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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Back again? lol.
The opening to this chapter was very interesting. What is Draco going to do to Luna exactly?
Now on to Ron and Hermione. When they kissed at the start of the chapter I really thought they were going to go the whole way. I was looking forward to Ron nailing Hermione into the tree lol.
I love Hermione's assumptions about what is wrong with Harry, and Ron keeping Hermione in the dark about the locket destruction. I hope Harry cheers up a little and I wonder how he'll react when he finds out that Luna has been kidnapped. And I wonder how Ron will react when he finds out about what Harry and Hermione got up to in his absence.
Keep up the good work,
Update very soon please,
tommy
The opening to this chapter was very interesting. What is Draco going to do to Luna exactly?
Now on to Ron and Hermione. When they kissed at the start of the chapter I really thought they were going to go the whole way. I was looking forward to Ron nailing Hermione into the tree lol.
I love Hermione's assumptions about what is wrong with Harry, and Ron keeping Hermione in the dark about the locket destruction. I hope Harry cheers up a little and I wonder how he'll react when he finds out that Luna has been kidnapped. And I wonder how Ron will react when he finds out about what Harry and Hermione got up to in his absence.
Keep up the good work,
Update very soon please,
tommy
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read Chapter 10 wow. Erotica should not be able to make people feel hurt but it does. You made this chapter hurt as much as the end to House Season 4. Amazing. Not great job but good writing I guess.
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Hermione, it seems would like this life style when she is truthful with herself and a little drunk. like she was in the last chapter I read. (i'm still a little behind where you are now) I think it would be a nice side story for a chapter. Ron may be a nice guy, but he is a follower, and he would follow Hermonie anywhere. Keep up the great writing.
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You don
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11
This was a lovely chapter. Luna and Harry are becoming so much closer now. They are sharing their insecurities and talking about their childhood. If they don
This was a lovely chapter. Luna and Harry are becoming so much closer now. They are sharing their insecurities and talking about their childhood. If they don
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just out of curiosity are you going to kill Tonks and Remus per canon or are you going to have them survive in your story?
Thanks
Thanks
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter. It was a long time coming though. Harry really seems like he's going tol kill someone or something though. Anyway great chapter and I lookforward to the next installment.
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9
Petunia is such a bitch, but to be honest, I can
Petunia is such a bitch, but to be honest, I can
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8
This was a passionate chapter. I love how Harry and Luna are getting to know each other. Here they are talking in bed, learning about each other
This was a passionate chapter. I love how Harry and Luna are getting to know each other. Here they are talking in bed, learning about each other