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by Bubblesoflove

schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You do realize that Hufflepuff had a cup and Ravenclaw had a tiara? I'm not accusing you of anything, just checking. I wonder what's gonna happen now that they've been caught? I think Albus is on their side, though he is trying to placate Ron and Molly somewhat so that they don't do anything else stupid.
person Elphaba
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Love this!
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My, my, Ginny's fallen for the dark side! Interesting story, please continue!
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so wild seeing Harry so "dark", even Draco. Very uncharacteristic, but I'm trying to go with the flow.
person Elphaba
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad you are back! I love this story!
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the story please update soon, need more
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well...I was initially thrown off by your misspellings and choppy sentences and wasn't sure I was going to read the story. But I have to admit I'm enjoying it! I love your portrayal of Luna, and I have to tell you, I never much cared for J.K. Rowling's description of her! And thank god you're not having Hermione and Ron stay a couple - I've always wanted Harry to be with her and could never understand how Rowling paired up our main characters in her series. Please find a really good beta to proof-read your story as the errors are annoying. BUT your overall idea is great and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!
person Elphaba
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fans herself and says damn! That was hot! Go Ginny!
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm still enjoying this story,I'd love to see more Draco/Luna, & I'm really enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work. (Thanks for reviewing my stories by the way)
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
here lately, since i have been getting caught up on my stories that i love to read, just rating them. not leaving a review. But oh my LORD!!

blood, gore, bodily fluids everywhere.......i am just loving the gore part!!


got any more coming???

laters! ~_^

miko