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by emilywaters

schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol really funny... obviously non-canon, as canon harry is in direct need of a brain, but that's exactly why I love fanfiction!
"I'm sure you had a good reason to cast AK on Dumbledore. Either that, or it was an accident." xD
person Krysty
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is awesome!!!! And so true! lol
Great Story!!
person Sara
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the star trek line.
P.s. Loved the story in general
Sara
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute...my favorite line:
person Alaine
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent one shot! This is the way Harry should have been in the books, thank you for uploading this!
person Hine
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES! This is just plain epic win. <3
person Layla
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that was cute for it makes just as much sense as me!!!!! Seriously I would think when my time comes I would think of silly things like those to make the end bearable. I also enjoy how you manage to confuse Severus with Harry's words. Thanks.
person padme82
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Excellent! That's the way it should have been. I *hated* that Harry never grew up in the books. "Oh, Snape is ugly and mean. *Of course* he's evil. That only makes sense since all mean, ugly people are totally evil."

Made no sense and I hated that JKR had to spell it out slowly and with hand puppets to Harry before he got it.

Cute one-shot. Excellent.

-- snow
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"It's like making someone wear a red shirt and sending them on an away mission on Star Trek.