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for White Flag

by bittsweetmis

person 261012
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it i can't wait to see what happen next
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man I dislike Dumbles!
Love the crossover, especially Edward/Harry. Thanks for that! Will it be Neville/Jacob?
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Iforgot to say in the other review, I hope since Harry has the Potter and Black money, he and Neville get a better car then that ugly red truck from the book. ...Nice jeep, truck, or car
person Hello
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great so far. I hope you update another chapter soon. :)
person Jan
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love Neville ^_^ poor Harry, he's always getting hurt .

Please update chapter 4 soon ^_^

Jan

person Jan
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start ^_^

Can't wait for chapter 3 to be updated, hope it's soon :-D

Jan
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...
-drool-
More pwease?
-puppy eyes-
person Alucinor
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know...I was a bit iffy at first but intrigued enough to click the story despite it. I must say I'm really pleasantly surprised. Your writing has a very natural flow to it and the actual story so far is very good. I'm really looking forward to an update because I'm curious as to where you'll go with this. You have the potential makings of a very good story here, love! ^.^

If you're planning to send e-mail updates I would love to be added: alucinor_eversoris@hotmail.com

If not...well, either way I'll be checking back for updates. Keep up the good work.
person evalhanne
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more!
person Tourette
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it